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Re: Envy
This is beautiful!!! I think I'm going to cry!!! "I'm jealous of everything that gets to know you How the wind steals your perfume How the sun touches your skin ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: A Promise, of Sort
This poem is amazing!!! Really lovely! U loved the way you can communicate different feelings! From sadness to somehow hope and happiness... "I met a miracle but I drove it ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Gemsworld Quest: Prologue
OK, so this was really interesting! :) I like your idea! The plot of this story was really detailed, which is good! I enjoy this kinds of stories! The fact ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: That's all she said
"I turn my face around, There's Blood Upon my shaking hands,I am down on my knees, On the street, Shocked, I am not alone, No, Not at all, The few ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: A writer's life
"After the long tiresome day I sit alone thinking apart from all the usual things what should I write about?" So true and a great way to start the poem! ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Our best on Offer
OK so this was really hard for me to understand. I had to read it 3 times to come up with an idea of what it might be... And by ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Looking Up
This is really great! You always need something to hold on to. I think this poem could inspire lots of people. "That’s what stars are for— Looking up at Just ...
Jun 18, 2013 -
Re: Broken For Life
This poem is amazing! I really like it! I hope you write more glove! Is a good point that being yourself is the best thing, people will appreciate you more. ...
Jun 18, 2013 -
Re: Determination
"No more does she believe in dreams, No more does she have any hope She believes the world is not what it seems And that she’s falling into a deep ...
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: The Nothing We Have
Wow, OK. This is a love poem, right? OK I'm going to say that this poem is really good. What I've understand is that this is a love poem, and ...
Jun 8, 2013 -
Re: Friends
Aww, this poem is really kind and sweet. "But that's what friends are for. They shine your shoes." I loved the metaphor. Literally, friends don't shine your shoes, but with ...
Jun 7, 2013 -
Re: Myself; Yourself
OK, this poem has strong feeling and communicates a great message. This poem is completely confusing, but the end lets you understand why. I love the last stanza. I really ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: A Flower's Inner Beauty
Hahaha... this poem is incredible. So beautiful it makes me appreciate nature. First of all, Welcome. Your poem is great. You should keep writing more! I like the way you ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: Ari
I have to say, this is really good. I don't really understand why you say you're not good enough. I'm really bad with short stories, you're not. I love the ...
Jun 5, 2013 -
Re: Anger Issues
Wao... This is really good. I actually felt like if I was seeing a movie. This story has cough my attention. I think that it has perfect characterization methods. A ...
Jun 4, 2013
