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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Envy

    This is beautiful!!! I think I'm going to cry!!! "I'm jealous of everything that gets to know you How the wind steals your perfume How the sun touches your skin ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Promise, of Sort

    This poem is amazing!!! Really lovely! U loved the way you can communicate different feelings! From sadness to somehow hope and happiness... "I met a miracle but I drove it ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Gemsworld Quest: Prologue

    OK, so this was really interesting! :) I like your idea! The plot of this story was really detailed, which is good! I enjoy this kinds of stories! The fact ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Other » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: That's all she said

    "I turn my face around, There's Blood Upon my shaking hands,I am down on my knees, On the street, Shocked, I am not alone, No, Not at all, The few ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A writer's life

    "After the long tiresome day I sit alone thinking apart from all the usual things what should I write about?" So true and a great way to start the poem! ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Our best on Offer

    OK so this was really hard for me to understand. I had to read it 3 times to come up with an idea of what it might be... And by ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Looking Up

    This is really great! You always need something to hold on to. I think this poem could inspire lots of people. "That’s what stars are for— Looking up at Just ...

    Jun 18, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Broken For Life

    This poem is amazing! I really like it! I hope you write more glove! Is a good point that being yourself is the best thing, people will appreciate you more. ...

    Jun 18, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Determination

    "No more does she believe in dreams, No more does she have any hope She believes the world is not what it seems And that she’s falling into a deep ...

    Jun 10, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The Nothing We Have

    Wow, OK. This is a love poem, right? OK I'm going to say that this poem is really good. What I've understand is that this is a love poem, and ...

    Jun 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Friends

    Aww, this poem is really kind and sweet. "But that's what friends are for. They shine your shoes." I loved the metaphor. Literally, friends don't shine your shoes, but with ...

    Jun 7, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Myself; Yourself

    OK, this poem has strong feeling and communicates a great message. This poem is completely confusing, but the end lets you understand why. I love the last stanza. I really ...

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: A Flower's Inner Beauty

    Hahaha... this poem is incredible. So beautiful it makes me appreciate nature. First of all, Welcome. Your poem is great. You should keep writing more! I like the way you ...

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Ari

    I have to say, this is really good. I don't really understand why you say you're not good enough. I'm really bad with short stories, you're not. I love the ...

    Jun 5, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: Anger Issues

    Wao... This is really good. I actually felt like if I was seeing a movie. This story has cough my attention. I think that it has perfect characterization methods. A ...

    Jun 4, 2013


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