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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Piano

    Hey! It's Mahvash here. I hope you are doing fine. So let's talk about this poem. First, I would love to congratulate you on nailing the personification part perfectly. The ...

    Feb 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: The Loaded Words

    Hey there! It's Mahvash. I hope you are doing fine. Let's talk about the poem! It's such a brilliant writing piece. I was hooked from the first line. As the ...

    Feb 22, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: What Heartbreak Feels Like

    Hello. It's Mahvash here. I hope you are having a great life. This poem is somewhat evocative. It gives you feels of heartbreak. It is engaging and every line depicts ...

    Nov 15, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The journey

    Hello. It's Mahvash here. I hope you are having a fantastic life. This poem is such an amazing piece of writing that the reader gets stunned for a while on ...

    Nov 15, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Searching For A friend.

    Hey! It's Mahvash here. Hope you are doing good. About this poem, I must say that it's really provokes emotions from depth of the heart. Every word, every line tells ...

    May 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Life Will Leave You Behind

    This is amazing. The very first line blew me away and I was like WOW!!. You have got really nice thoughts. The use of plain words and the innovation of ...

    Dec 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Whisper

    Hey! It's Mahvash here. This poem is really unique and I must say it. Yeah, there are some weak points but overall it's very very engaging. It basically cultivates the ...

    Dec 2, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Betrayed A Dream

    EXCELLENT poem. This is a very emotional one and a good write though. Dreams are supposed to be fulfill. You must go ahead to get it done :) Anyways it's ...

    Aug 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Stranger

    Hey!! It's Mahvash here and hope you are doing really fine. The poem you have written is such a nice one. I enjoyed it and it's really very engaging. Short ...

    Aug 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Hard

    It's good. The way you have used the word "HARD" in different ways is appreciable. Life is hard, this is a bitter truth. But one can get over it. all ...

    Jun 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dawn , the time of my death

    Hey! it's Mahvash here. This poem is really engaging from top to bottom. The selection of words and the way you presented them is really very nice. You have amazingly ...

    Jun 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Sleeeeep

    Hey!! It's Mahvash here. Hope you are doing fine. This poem is very emotional as you tried to sleep but the cuts and bruises don't let you sleep. The flow ...

    Jun 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: What happens when your Heart Aches

    Hey!! It's Mahvash here. And hope you are doing fine. So let's talk about the poem. to some extent it's kind of emotional poem I must say. Because it has ...

    Jun 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Thousand Words

    Hey it's Mahvash here. Hope you are doing fine. Let's talk about this poem. This is a really deep one. It really makes you think. Really life has got a ...

    Jun 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Dad

    Whoa whoa whoa!! Seriously liked it a lot. That depicts your true feelings for your dad as ell as your love. It reflects how much you are proud of your ...

    Jun 3, 2016


Be steadfast as a tower that doth not bend its stately summit to the tempest’s shock.
— Dante Alighieri