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Re: Piano
Hey! It's Mahvash here. I hope you are doing fine. So let's talk about this poem. First, I would love to congratulate you on nailing the personification part perfectly. The ...
Feb 22, 2020 -
Re: The Loaded Words
Hey there! It's Mahvash. I hope you are doing fine. Let's talk about the poem! It's such a brilliant writing piece. I was hooked from the first line. As the ...
Feb 22, 2020 -
Re: What Heartbreak Feels Like
Hello. It's Mahvash here. I hope you are having a great life. This poem is somewhat evocative. It gives you feels of heartbreak. It is engaging and every line depicts ...
Nov 15, 2017 -
Re: The journey
Hello. It's Mahvash here. I hope you are having a fantastic life. This poem is such an amazing piece of writing that the reader gets stunned for a while on ...
Nov 15, 2017 -
Re: Searching For A friend.
Hey! It's Mahvash here. Hope you are doing good. About this poem, I must say that it's really provokes emotions from depth of the heart. Every word, every line tells ...
May 19, 2017 -
Re: Life Will Leave You Behind
This is amazing. The very first line blew me away and I was like WOW!!. You have got really nice thoughts. The use of plain words and the innovation of ...
Dec 3, 2016 -
Re: Whisper
Hey! It's Mahvash here. This poem is really unique and I must say it. Yeah, there are some weak points but overall it's very very engaging. It basically cultivates the ...
Dec 2, 2016 -
Re: Betrayed A Dream
EXCELLENT poem. This is a very emotional one and a good write though. Dreams are supposed to be fulfill. You must go ahead to get it done :) Anyways it's ...
Aug 25, 2016 -
Re: The Stranger
Hey!! It's Mahvash here and hope you are doing really fine. The poem you have written is such a nice one. I enjoyed it and it's really very engaging. Short ...
Aug 13, 2016 -
Re: Hard
It's good. The way you have used the word "HARD" in different ways is appreciable. Life is hard, this is a bitter truth. But one can get over it. all ...
Jun 21, 2016 -
Re: Dawn , the time of my death
Hey! it's Mahvash here. This poem is really engaging from top to bottom. The selection of words and the way you presented them is really very nice. You have amazingly ...
Jun 21, 2016 -
Re: Sleeeeep
Hey!! It's Mahvash here. Hope you are doing fine. This poem is very emotional as you tried to sleep but the cuts and bruises don't let you sleep. The flow ...
Jun 9, 2016 -
Re: What happens when your Heart Aches
Hey!! It's Mahvash here. And hope you are doing fine. So let's talk about the poem. to some extent it's kind of emotional poem I must say. Because it has ...
Jun 8, 2016 -
Re: A Thousand Words
Hey it's Mahvash here. Hope you are doing fine. Let's talk about this poem. This is a really deep one. It really makes you think. Really life has got a ...
Jun 8, 2016 -
Re: Dad
Whoa whoa whoa!! Seriously liked it a lot. That depicts your true feelings for your dad as ell as your love. It reflects how much you are proud of your ...
Jun 3, 2016
