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Re: Winter's Verdict
Hello Clarity, Great poem... I really like the name you have for this poem, it sounds...cool and frosty. I know, my writing and word choice are really poor, but your ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: I need to kill.
Manisha, Great poetry in, I Need To Kill! The first thing that I thought of was Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets because of the basilisk which Harry can ...
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Re: Release
Hello ConverseFireGirl, Great poem, I mean the writing of the poem, not the situation. Although this poem is sad, it was well-written. I hope that this isn't true because suicide ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: On Top of the World
This really isn't a great review, but hey, consider it whichever you want. Great poetry! By the way, I'm not sure if the word "Universe" needs to be capitalized. It ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: I'm Sorry
Hello. I read this poem or short story and was really moved by it because of the power of emotion you had put into it. This was well-written as it ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Numb
Hello, I just finished reading your short story about this boy. I thought it, to be honest, a little depressing at first, but I know that this is the lifestyle ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: The Shattering Melodies
Hello! I read your poem, The Shattering Melodies, and thought that it was well-written. I thought that you did well rhyming your poetry and that it gave the poem a ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: Dracula`s Heart
Hello, I am here to review. I really thought that this was a great poem that you wrote. I read the book Dracula by Bram Stoker and who isn't obsessing ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: that boy
Great writing! I just finished reading this and I have some things to say. I wasn't really sure whether or not you meant to keep the letter of each line ...
Dec 26, 2013 -
Re: What I believe is true
Great poem! I just finished reading this I really thought that it was well-written. I really don't have a lot to pick at except for a few punctuation errors. "Its ...
Dec 26, 2013 -
Re: Midnight
I just read over this and I thought that this was a well-written poem. I thought that when you used the short sentence fragments, it made it more dramatic and ...
Dec 26, 2013 -
Re: Freedom
Hello... I just read your piece and with the little I read of it, I thought it sounded great. I liked how you described the scene and the fact that ...
Dec 26, 2013
