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Re: Chapter 1: Nice to Meet You, Part 2
Hello @klennon14! Magenta here for a quick review on your piece. To start, congrats on cool name choices. I know that when I'm writing, I always have difficulty creating some ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Crazy Little Love Story (4) Rumor Has It
Hello. Magenta here for a quick review. ;) I really like your writing style and I enjoy the descriptions that you have placed in your stories. I really don't have ...
Jan 26, 2015 -
Re: Locker Room Girls
This is too true @myjaspercat! I have never enjoyed the locker room and I don't think anyone else has. You've truly captured the picture in this piece. Nice job! I ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Dual Identity - Chapter 3
Hello! Magenta here for a quick review! I love the title that you have! It's really interesting and mysterious and makes me want to ask if you would help me ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: The Hybrids (Chapter 12)
Hey! Magenta here for a quick review of your work. Happy Review Day, by the way. Wait, that rhymed! ;) Anyway, I just wanted to say a few things about ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Letter to the man who considers me a mistake
Wow, @forgottenmemories. This is truly a deep piece in front of me. I am sure that this has happened before, and I really feel that you've captured a terrible situation ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: With Him I feel.....
Hello! Magenta here for a quick review. ;) I would start out by saying that you are a great poet. I liked repetition that matched with the title. That completes ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1/Part 1 (Hair of Fire, Eyes of ice)
Hello. Magenta here for a review! ;) I am in love with short stories. I've probably already said that, but I'll say it again anyway. I really like your title. ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Warrior's fanfics
Hello! Magenta here for a review! I am really picky when it comes to review, so don't take it personally. ;) To begin with the beginning... The stream of silver ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Letting Go
Hello, @zandalovespanda! It's Magenta here, for a review. I haven't been on here for a very long time and I am a little rusty. ;) Welcome to YWS! I know ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Broken Pencils Are Pointless 3.1
Broken Pencils Are Pointless! I get it! ;) Hello, @Deanie! I really haven't been on lately, which is why I am trying to get some reviews done. I want to ...
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: Ordinary man
Hello. Magenta here for a review! I see that you've decided to write a poem. The title of this poem is simple, which makes readers want to read it. Other ...
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: Discriminate
Hello! Magenta here for another review. I'm no poet either, but I'm here to write a review for you. I'm glad that you've written this. I think that it brings ...
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: .
Magenta here for a review! The air was filled with excitement as people were ready to see some dueling; Anna leaned against the table in which students dueled on. One ...
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 14
Hello. Magenta here to write a quick review! The Psychic Circle? Interesting title, I must say. And interesting names as well. I openly admit to having not read the previous ...
Aug 31, 2014
