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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1: Nice to Meet You, Part 2

    Hello @klennon14! Magenta here for a quick review on your piece. To start, congrats on cool name choices. I know that when I'm writing, I always have difficulty creating some ...

    Sep 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: Crazy Little Love Story (4) Rumor Has It

    Hello. Magenta here for a quick review. ;) I really like your writing style and I enjoy the descriptions that you have placed in your stories. I really don't have ...

    Jan 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: Locker Room Girls

    This is too true @myjaspercat! I have never enjoyed the locker room and I don't think anyone else has. You've truly captured the picture in this piece. Nice job! I ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Dual Identity - Chapter 3

    Hello! Magenta here for a quick review! I love the title that you have! It's really interesting and mysterious and makes me want to ask if you would help me ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The Hybrids (Chapter 12)

    Hey! Magenta here for a quick review of your work. Happy Review Day, by the way. Wait, that rhymed! ;) Anyway, I just wanted to say a few things about ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Other » Other, Other Re: Letter to the man who considers me a mistake

    Wow, @forgottenmemories. This is truly a deep piece in front of me. I am sure that this has happened before, and I really feel that you've captured a terrible situation ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Other » Realistic, Romantic Re: With Him I feel.....

    Hello! Magenta here for a quick review. ;) I would start out by saying that you are a great poet. I liked repetition that matched with the title. That completes ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter 1/Part 1 (Hair of Fire, Eyes of ice)

    Hello. Magenta here for a review! ;) I am in love with short stories. I've probably already said that, but I'll say it again anyway. I really like your title. ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: Warrior's fanfics

    Hello! Magenta here for a review! I am really picky when it comes to review, so don't take it personally. ;) To begin with the beginning... The stream of silver ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: Letting Go

    Hello, @zandalovespanda! It's Magenta here, for a review. I haven't been on here for a very long time and I am a little rusty. ;) Welcome to YWS! I know ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Broken Pencils Are Pointless 3.1

    Broken Pencils Are Pointless! I get it! ;) Hello, @Deanie! I really haven't been on lately, which is why I am trying to get some reviews done. I want to ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Ordinary man

    Hello. Magenta here for a review! I see that you've decided to write a poem. The title of this poem is simple, which makes readers want to read it. Other ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Discriminate

    Hello! Magenta here for another review. I'm no poet either, but I'm here to write a review for you. I'm glad that you've written this. I think that it brings ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: .

    Magenta here for a review! The air was filled with excitement as people were ready to see some dueling; Anna leaned against the table in which students dueled on. One ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 14

    Hello. Magenta here to write a quick review! The Psychic Circle? Interesting title, I must say. And interesting names as well. I openly admit to having not read the previous ...

    Aug 31, 2014


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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