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Re: my brothers and sisters are buried in the backyard
Hi, rl320! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? :D This was a very interesting poem. Offering no more information than that the persona ...
Sep 22, 2016 -
Re: A Message From Ginny
Hi, Tigerlilly37! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? :D When I saw the name of the poem, the fangirl part of me ...
Sep 21, 2016 -
Re: You and I
Hi Scartuina! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? :D I love how easily this poem flows, and the word choice you used throughout ...
Sep 20, 2016 -
Re: Virtual Reality
Hi survavegeta12! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? :D The title was made me check this work out. With things like the Oculus ...
Sep 19, 2016 -
Re: Past
Hi Mialynire! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? I can barely find anything needed to be changed in this piece in regards to ...
Sep 18, 2016 -
Re: Chapter Two
Hi, Zoe! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? :D I'll start with the overall problems like in the last two parts of ...
Sep 16, 2016 -
Re: Chapter one
Hi, Zoe! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? :D Like last time, I'll start with the overall problems and then move onto ...
Sep 16, 2016 -
Re: Legacy of Shadows
Hi, shadowprincess16! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? :D I'll start with the overall problems first. There's only a couple, and I'm ...
Sep 15, 2016 -
Re: Prologue
Hi Zoe (is it alright if I call you that?)! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? :D I'll start with the overall problems ...
Sep 14, 2016 -
Re: Frost Lark News 9/11/16
Hi, Sheyren! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? :D I will always love this. Like I've said many times, this reminds me so ...
Sep 13, 2016 -
Re: A Winding Road
Hi mavisknightly! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? :D First things first: you're a great poet. I love the repetition you used in ...
Sep 12, 2016 -
Re: The hand that first held mine
Hi, Empires! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? I really enjoyed reading this poem. The word choice was great, and I love the ...
Sep 11, 2016 -
Re: Poetry
Hi, godlypopo! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? :D This poem is so relatable for me! As someone who tends to stick to ...
Sep 10, 2016 -
Re: Like A Paper
Hi serendipitous! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? :D I really loved the meaning of this poem; I love how it teaches the ...
Sep 9, 2016 -
Re: Lonely and I
Hi, ChildofWriting! Mage here to review your work! So let's get to it, shall we? :D As someone who started writing because she was lonely, this poem is very understandable ...
Sep 8, 2016