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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Oh child of love

    Hey there, @TheMulticoloredCyr! I'm here to review your work. heart From the two poems of yours that I've read so far, imagery seems to be one of your strengths. I ...

    Sep 8, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Breathing

    Hey there, @TheMulticoloredCyr! I'm here to review your work. heart One of the things that I really love about this poem is the imagery that you use throughout. The references ...

    Sep 8, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: This could be Heaven

    Hello again! I'm back to read another one of your imagery-filled poems. heart Compared to your other poems that focus on nature, this poem actually brings the reader into the ...

    Sep 6, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A River of Orange

    Hey there, @FlamingPhoenix! Here I am again, ready to review your poem. After reading this poem and the one I just commented on, I'm starting to suspect that you love ...

    Sep 6, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Fading Light

    Hey there! I'm back again to review your poetry. One thing that I really love about this poem is that it's not a narrator trying to convey their feelings to ...

    Sep 6, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Alone

    Hey there - I'm back again to review. heart Sometimes I have trouble relating to the more emotional works on YWS, especially when it comes to something as personal as ...

    Sep 6, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Creatures of the Past

    Hey @FlamingPhoenix! I really enjoying reading through this poem. Dragons are some of my favorite kinds of fictional/mythical creatures, and you have no idea how happy I was when you ...

    Sep 6, 2019
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Rain | 3 Haiku Poems

    I really enjoyed your spider web haiku, so here's my attempt at reviewing your series of them. I've mentioned this in some of my other reviews, but you're really good ...

    Sep 5, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Math

    I remember seeing this iconic poem in the literary spotlight, but I never reviewed it - so here I am to fix that mistake! One of the things that I ...

    Sep 5, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Life: Spider Web

    Hey Liberty! This is a short poem, so expect a shorter review than usual. :P First off: I love the simile! It's cute, creative, and the type of thing that ...

    Sep 5, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Snickers

    Hey, Liberty! I'm back again with another review. heart First off - I see that you wrote this poem with @26Gemini! I love seeing collaborative poetry; it leaves me guessing ...

    Sep 5, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Deleted

    Hey, Liberty! I'm here to review your work. heart This poem brought me back! I wore a lot of black shirts back in my early years of high school, and ...

    Sep 5, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Love Affair

    Hey there, brookeallo! I'm here to review your work. heart Your poem's title suggests that the poem is about an affair. As someone who has never been in a situation ...

    Sep 3, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Love and trust.

    Hey there, rosej! Your poem looked like it had an interesting topic, so I thought I'd try my hand at reviewing it. heart I always struggle with conciseness, so something ...

    Sep 3, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Note

    Hey, Riellehn! I'm here - as promised. heart Suicide is a difficult topic to talk about, especially when trying to portray it from the victim's perspective. You did a great ...

    Sep 2, 2019


Imagination is the one weapon in the war against reality.
— Jules de Gaultier