MadHatter

Okay, lets end this topic and get back to crits...

What the heck are you talking about? I was sticking up for all my friends. I don't want to see my best friends die!!! She almost died Gwen. I don't ...

Don't mock that store. It rocks.

Huh?

Thanks all. I'll fix these mistakes you pointed out and present you the new and improved ninth grade version of Empty soon. *Fellne>> Crammed was the only word I could ...

Good poem. It was a little repetitive at points, but it was good.

Okay...that was supposed to be a poem right? If it was an okay poem. I really didn't get the last line: Too bad I want to ber. What is that ...

I liked it, but once you said it was supposed to be Global Warming, I hated it. You should never really tell what a poem is about when it's written ...

Good poem. It sort of lacked the rhythm a poem needs, but then again poems don't need rhythm at all. There are no rules in poetry. And for a suicide ...

It was good. It was about a caged animal isn't it? It was a little hard to follow, but okay. Kyte>> Notice it said Drip Drop? The upside down poem ...

Yes, BBB is right. Prelude is for music. I also felt that when Lt. Surge read the 1594 thing, it sounded un-human. It was almost like he was a robot ...

Yes. It's very, very, very short. And I agree with Ayra. I don't know how many times I've heard about poems, or read poems about lost love, or people losing ...

I really liked this one. It was very sweet and touching. I don't know why you capitialized the first word of the third sentence in each stanza. But poetry really ...

Wow...that's very interesting. I hope you rate this PG-13. I hope you truly don't feel like this, or actually went through that...

Clever. You used this poem to basically tell everyone why your poems might not make sense grammar wise. But I have to agree with Bella. This poem is very in ...