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Buster

by Gwenevire


This is a little poem that Ayra and I made when we where very young. Its about our cuisine's dog Buster.

Ayra if you remember anything more of the poem please tell me and I will put it up.
I seem to remember something about supper Kleenex horfer or something. I can't remember...
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Buster

Buster the amazing jumping dog
Bed Hog
Always on your head dog
Waiting to be fed dog
Shedding on your rug dog
Cleaning out your mug dog
Always on your mind dog
Because he's a very fine dog


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Mon Dec 17, 2007 10:03 pm
Gwenevire says...



Thanks =]
We weren't to young. But young enough to have cute writing!




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Mon Dec 17, 2007 9:57 pm
lysolstinks says...



I liked reading this, it helped knowing you were young when it was written.
It was cute.

carl




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Mon Dec 17, 2007 1:08 am
Gwenevire says...



I can see what you mean.
Thanks for the review :D




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Mon Dec 17, 2007 12:52 am
MadHatter says...



Good poem. It was a little repetitive at points, but it was good.




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Sun Dec 16, 2007 10:49 pm
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Yeah but I don't remember where it goes in the poem. I will figure it out someday! XD
It was when buster was just a puppy I think so we where like 10 or 11. Wow..
I am getting old :lol: Oh dear Ayra! I am going to be thirteen in one month! Eeks! We have to do that list of ours!
Sorry I am getting off topic. If you remember where to put the kleenex bit tell me :D




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Sun Dec 16, 2007 9:57 pm
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Yeah, there was part 'Buster the amazing Kleenex Horfer dog'
Weird, I know. :wink:
Anyways, I'm glad you put this up! :) But we weren't that young when we wrote it...we were nine years old, I think? *scratches head* I can't remember.
Cheers,
Ayra :elephant:




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Sun Nov 18, 2007 3:21 pm
Gwenevire says...



Thanks you two :D
But how shall I rate it?
One sec... I will go cheque that out now!




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Sun Nov 18, 2007 7:54 am
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Hey, this is very rhythmatic, makes me want to put a neat beat to it and make it a marching song.

This must be a special poem to you both...very sweet.




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Awww... this is so cute! The only slightly weird part is when it is "bed hog" because he's a dog in every other ending. ;)

And don't forget to rate it! Then everyone can see it. :)





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