MUCHO

Ah yes writer's block, the poet's natural enemy.

it's good, just change them into complete sentences, that will work much better. :)

Looks real cool.

I liked this, but it's kind of useless and all----I knew exactly where it was going after a paragraph. Maybe a poem would be better; at least it was short. ...

If I'm not mistaken, Helium is in a balloon, and hydrogen is in stars. But I got a C in chemistry, so I'm probably mistaken...but I swear...

I like the structure, I don't have much of a critique, but I do like the structure.

I put in the damn indents, why won't this freaking website listen to me?

Space.

This is a universal truth, that math kills, plain and simple--- 4 and a half out of 5 stars--- you are a prophet and an angel.

Just break the damn glass! liked the poem by the way...

Nice, but there are a few mistakes left, actually pretty glaring ones that can stop the story dead as its read aloud--- 1) Though it's not a mistake, I don't ...

F*** cancer, tell it to get off of your cloud man. Killed my dad's old man. "Hey, you, cancer, get off of our cloud!"

I don't really know what to make of this, and you say my poem doesn't make sense, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, but maybe I am just not deep enough to understand what's going ...

ooopsies- "Isolated BY thier company." :) Gotta do my APUSH homework now.

Write music for this. Please.