Lycando

Hey there polink! So you're back with the fourth chapter and I'm back to review it! :P I'll be honest, I liked this chapter the most among all of them. ...

Hey there butterfly! Be warned, this review may be pretty harsh :) But just trying to help. First off, it's not exciting at all. Think about reading about someone's life ...

Hey there foreverfree! I like your story. It seems that you're quite young though, from the way you write it. A short piece of flash fiction, and also seemingly written ...

Hey there polink! I'm back to review the third chapter! Right, since I've read chapter one and two. I should be able to understand this, but I don't. As I ...

Hey there ddman18! Now I feel that this chapter is too short. In fact, both the prologue and chapter 1 could have been combined to form a single chapter. I ...

Hey there Marbel! I liked this story! But I do think it's cliche, many stories are about a so called disease which is spread around the world and people are ...

Hey there methirr! I really enjoyed this story! It's like being forced to a fate which you can't escape. The child who always had a happy family but one day ...

Hey there Clarity, here as requested! I like this story very much! It shows the troubled feelings of a human which doesn't act like a human. An interesting concept indeed... ...

Hey there Malav! Firstly, I like this story a lot, it's a nice piece of flash fiction. I like the first sentence, there it was again. It makes the ribbon ...

Hey there S.S! First of all, I like this story, it clearly shows both the characters of Paolo and the fairy, which is what every good story has. I like ...

Hey there! I like this story, it's already in the midst of the conflict at the start, where the character is suffering at the hands of her torturer or killer. ...

Hey there! I like the continuation from the first part, and in my opinion I like this chapter better. Firstly it has the excitement in it, a murder. That's what ...

Hey there LoyalHeart! Firstly, I felt that this story was pretty short, even for a chapter. The fight scene could have gone on for much longer before the mysterious lady ...

Hey there! Firstly, your first paragraph is nearly impossible to read, due to it being a whole chunk of text, but I shall try. :) Wow, I really like this. ...

Hey there Deadman! First off all, I liked your story. It kind of reminds me of Eragon though, having the Shloski as the enemies and having these Slayers to fight ...