Lupin

Hi Katnes! Wow this is short. It sounds interesting though, and I understand why you chose to keep it as such. I have a few questions that might help with ...

Hi Blue Africa! I'm Lupin, and I'm glad I get to review this poem for/analyse you. I really enjoyed reading it, I found the theme to be interesting and the ...

Hey there! Lupin here for a review. I'm not sure if you're familiar with the ASOIAF (Game of Thrones) series, but there were a few lines from this that really ...

Hey Ashkitten83! Lupin here for a review. (I have a rather small amount of experience on this topic so if I say anything dumb/insensitive/offensive, it was not intended). First off, ...

Hey silversky! Lupin here for a review. I really, really enjoyed this, you have incredible talent as a poet! There isn't any advice/criticism that I can give you because this ...

Hey Jerrell47! Lupin here for a review. This was really good! There were a few grammatical/capitalisation errors, but you said that you wrote this on your phone so that is ...

Hey Jokerwritingworks. I'm Lupin. First off, I'm really sorry to hear about your friend's friend. This was a really sweet thing for you to do and I can't imagine how ...

Hey Strange! Lupin here. All the problem areas that I came across have been previously mentioned, so there's no point in me going over that. I'll just mention what I ...

Hey EscapeToNeverland! First off, I want to say that I enjoyed this poem. It seems to come from sort of personal experience? The relation of the internal struggle to the ...

Hey pretzelsing (awesome name by the way)! Lupin here. This was super adorable! I never thought that the feels would be released over a tree, but they were :3 This ...

Hey Deanie! Lupin here. I really enjoyed this poem! Haha as previously stated by others, it's completely relatable, more so for those on this site since we're all either interested ...

Hey Annapurna! Lupin here. First off, this was a really interesting topic to choose to write about (and a great one, at that). I really loved it, but I was ...

Hey Falconer! Lupin here. I really enjoyed this poem. The imagery in these rhyming couples is incredible, particularly the lines; "The years suspended in a drop of sap Beautiful treasure ...

Hey Reet3103! I read through this, and I can understand the story, however, I don't understand the meaning. For example, why was there a bush? Why was it sapphire? Why ...

Hey Biluata! Lupin here. I have to say, I do find this piece hard-hitting, however relatable. My interpretation is that the person in question had to take their life into ...