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To start out, the first stanza had some grammatical error. Instead of, "I didn't following," it should be "I didn't follow." Other than that, I don't have any problems with ...

First, let me get this out of the way. When it started, I though this was going to be just another bully poem. Wow I was wrong. You took racism ...

In the first two lines, it made me flash back to the memory of my uncle. That was what really caught my attention. The rest of it easily connected with ...

This poem is one I can easily connect to, as I have once been in a place of change that was not easily accepted. It gave me that feeling of ...

One word; Wow. I've seen your name around YWS a lot, and now I understand why. I have absolutely no negative comments about this what-so-ever. One of my favorite things ...

Now, when I first started reading it, I didn't see how it related to astronomy. As I continued to read it, however, I understood it better. This is very tricky ...

Now, there were a few errors. Such as the "your" instead of "you're" in the last sentence. Aside from that, this was a pretty nice poem of love and rejection. ...

Before I begin, I want to say I love how it starts out and there is some questioning about what is happening, and as it ends, the scene becomes more ...

Now, I just want to say that I've never had the wish to fly or have wings. This is just me personally due to my fear of heights. Yet I ...

I wanted to get this part out of the way; the first line holds an error. There should be an 's' on the word 'hold.' As I was reading this ...

First of all, I love the metaphors intertwined in the poem. The way you talked about the music from her chest and it being her beating heart really struck me. ...