LukanRinta

Hello! Lukan here! I haven't reviewed any work in quite awhile, so here goes for my first step back into the territory. I'm going to be a little nit-picky with ...

Oh my, it has been years - literally - since I have written a review on this site. I'm a little out of practice, so here goes nothing: I liked ...

I really liked this. Especially the ending. It went out strong, with a roar, and really had a lasting echo that rang out to me. My advice though, would be ...

For me, this piece really clicked. I find myself going through this exact same thing right now, so I could really connect to the poem. Your use of small, simple ...

WOW! This was absolutely amazing from start to finish! The first stanza caught my attention with the interesting yet perfect rhymes and the originality of the thought. Throughout you kept ...

I like this better than the original song... Actually I love it. Usually I find spin-offs to be agonizingly simple or just way too different to truly be a spin-off, ...

Holy muffin cakes! Haha, sorry for my strange enthusiasm, but this was beautiful in every way possible. It didn't have much rhythm, but it was enough to make it a ...

The boys on the field, The crowds all here; Hot dogs and nachos. They win ; we cheer. Semi-colon and comma use can be confusing, be careful. My cap against ...

This made me smile. And not many poets have managed to do that! I really enjoyed this little bit. It was definitely different (which is good!!) and it was entertaining. ...

Hey! Lukan here! I'm going to be reviewing your poem today! :P Before I say anything more, I'd like you to know that the idea for this poem is really ...

This was an extremely well written piece! I loved the rhythm and the idea of the bit. The imagery was strong and complete. Although I have a question: At the ...

I liked the idea and the theme a lot. And you did a great job setting the mood! I do have to point out that "refrigerated" is kind of and ...

I completely love the idea here, but there were a few minor... issues I had in places. There were times where it was very repetative. For example, towards the beginning ...

Senseless Love. I feel it fly and fall about me, But is it really what I see? To me, it is not. But to them, to thee? This is a ...

The imagery was abundant! In a good way, though. I loved the way you worded some of the lines. Like the last two lines. You drew the poem nicely to ...