Love2act4ever

I really love the way you rhyme in this one. It does not seem forced at all. It flowed very nicely with the poem, and the imagery the words came ...

Hey it's you again. I just seem to love your work. Everything you write seems to be so modern. I keep throwing that term out, but you have such originality ...

I agree with the other two. This just does not strike me as peotry.It's not even free is more like a prose if you think about it. It could be ...

Oh wow Danielle, I really liked this. I agree with Suzanne on this one. You should write the chat conversation like a chat room. You could even use different colors. ...

Well done. I felt the rhyming fit, and I didn't think it was too forced at all. I really liked this line, Baby, you try to justify, to moralize, to ...

I really liked it. Your title dragged me in. I was, in a sense, very curious to read this, and it seemed so different from the title. It was good. ...

I agree with Rykun7, and I can also relate with same situation. People are going off to college and it's a scary thing for some. These years determine what we ...

I felt it was very repetitive. That is not always a bad thing, but in some cases it works and in some it doesn't. I felt like it didn't but ...

The trees are blooming their bright flowers Under the sprinkle of spring showers. They open their eager faces up to the sun With the winter's cold long since gone. Wow. ...

It was a little bit of a cliché at parts but it was short, sweet, and to the point. However, I do agree with Vernon. There wasn't much emotion in ...

I thought this was very well written. I felt like it was very original and it spoke to me. Now I thought at first you had a sort of a ...

Is that all? I thought it would be longer. I was kind of getting into it. There was one line I did not get, but I think it was a ...

I agree with the others. A lot of the rhymes did sound forced. I felt it was not really original at certain parts, and that the rhymes were vey cliché ...

For some reason, when it said "Let the rain fall" I thought of Hillary Duff. 0.o Scary. I did feel like the chorus was repetitive. It reminds me something but ...

Is this to be apocalyptic or something? Or was it fantasy? Either way I liked it. I felt the rhythm you were keeping went well, and I also felt that ...