Lost_in_dreamland

11:11am The room was a nauseating site, full of antiseptic smells and bland colors with bright whites. I like this opening sentence, it draws us in, maybe it's not quite ...

Note: I am sorry if there are so many werewolf/vampire stories on here, but I always wanted to try my hand at writing one. All critiques are welcome and appreciated. ...

Waiting. The bed is crooked. Two hands intertwined, fingers twisted in knots like the roots of a tree. His face is a slice of oak, gnarled into an ‘O’ shape ...

Hahah :lol: I'm no artistic genius but I agree most definetly. I feel the same way about books too, how good they were back in the 1800's compared with today's ...

Wow! Demeter's review was good. :lol: but I disagree with her about the start, I think (despite having no poetic talent at all) that it's fine as an opening sentence ...

Hey there :) I come with a promised review :lol: if you've got anything else you'd like me to review, just tell me ;) x We got in his car, ...

I'm terribly amateur-ish at poetry, being a beginner. Feel free to tear apart. :twisted: You are not Sarah. You are not! :) ______ Forgetting all other things I take to ...

Wow! I'm the first person to review this. Unusual ;) x Jackie was highly aware of the bronze-haired girl seated beside her, a veiled madness hidden beneath her pretty features. ...

Hey there Sarah ;) They told us to look away from the flames, to ignore showering silver and mandarin green settling on our eyelashes. But we didn’t. I adore that ...

Thank you for those who have been helping me with this story. Your criticism really helps me out, and I appreciate it. I wouldn't know what I would do without ...

II - Raindrop I love your titles, they're so apt. She's being followed. Great beginning She can see them watching her as she walks along the rough cobblestones. She doesn’t ...

This is the second part of a true story. It needs a lot of work. I know I've alternated between past tense in the first part and present tense in ...

Author's Note: I needed to let this out of my system. It’s the first story I’ve written that’s based on my life. Thanks so much for reading Hello Hey Sarah, ...

Hey :) This took me ages, hahahah :lol: I hope it helps you x Pain wasn’t something I had asked for. Torture wasn’t something I asked for either. Pain and ...

Darkness wraps me inside Ever, ever again Its soothing power holds me tight Why in the name of Lord, why? It won't let me go, still I feel free But ...