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Re: Backstabbers.
Hi there, LGF here for a review! I thought this was a neat poem, in whole. You dealt with a common theme and made it unique, and I like your ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Save A Life
Hello, LGF here for a quick review! I liked and disliked this poem at the same time. At parts it was lovely and inspirational and then you come in with ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Ode to the Radio
Hello fellow red teamer! What a poem you've got here! Wow, it really is beautiful. The richness of the vocabulary used, the imagery and flow of it all was just ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: That Bitch
wWow, nice poem! You can practically feel the anger bursting out of the computer screen! I loved it! It was really good imagery used and you set a fast pace ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: {Untitled}
Hi there, LGF here for a review. Okay, so I'm going to do a stanza by stanza thing and then give my final thoughts at the end. Trapped inside a ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Isolation
Hi there, LGF here for a review; This made me think, this poem. It was interesting, the whole concept of isolation. It felt free, and raw, like you didn't need ...
Apr 25, 2014 -
Re: Slowly, Softly
Hi there, LGF here for a review. This was an interesting poem. I'll get onto the positives first. I liked the simplicity of the love described. Just raw, the affection, ...
Apr 25, 2014 -
Re: Why I hate the past tense.
LGF here to review your poem; Wow, another beautiful poem. You really are talented. It was touching and bitter, and I loved how you had no idea at the start ...
Apr 25, 2014 -
Re: If God Was A Rapper
Hi there, LGF here for a quick review I read this a couple of times, and when I finally sat down to review it I had a big smile on ...
Apr 25, 2014 -
Re: I fell in love with a boy in five inch heels
Wow, really beautiful. Once again you blow me away with your imagery and vocabulary. You really do have a talent for telling stories, it was heart felt and beautiful. I ...
Apr 5, 2014 -
Re: Paradise Syndrome.
Hi there, LGF here for a quick review. This was a neat little poem, bittersweet and haunting yet it has a light tone at the end with 'Until we meet ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: When you blink.
Hi there, LGF here for a quick review! Wow, your poem certainly made an impression on me. It was haunting and unsettling and made me think deeply about growing up, ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: An open invitation to my dad.
Hi there! First of all, this is a such a beautiful poem. I've read some of you other stuff and you really have a gift for giving off so much ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: Daddy
Wow, really, really nice poem. I could feel the emotion that you felt and I'm positive that you've experienced this, just from the raw emotion you can feel in it. ...
Mar 23, 2014 -
Re: One Breath
Hi there, LGF here for a quick review... Wow, this was an interesting poem. It was... Well I don't really know, it just left me sort of speechless at the ...
Mar 16, 2014
