LordGreenleaf

Hi there! I found this poem starkly beautiful because of the sparse but heavily descriptive language that you used. For example some of my favourite lines: 'in the ponds of ...

Hi there! I thought this poem was very intriguing and I really liked the semi - rhyme structure of it. The first line really struck me as powerful and drawing ...

Hi Bambi, LGL here for a quick review So firstly I thought about this poem for a while thinking about what to write. I've got to be honest my initial ...

Hi there, LGF here for a review. I thought this was a solid poem, that had some really interesting themes and ideas. I liked your new spin on death, and ...

Hi there, LGF here for a quick review. WOW That was pretty much my first thought. It was unexpected poem, and I just randomly clicked on it and was mind ...

Hello there, LGF here for a quick review. First off, I really liked this. It was short and sweet and had some really nice flow to it, that made the ...

Hi there, LGF here for a review, I thought this was a good poem. You did most things right, you set it out in stanza's and you picked a topic ...

Hi there, LGF here for a quick review. I thought this was an interesting poem. You use some beautiful imagery at the start that sucks you right into the piece; ...

Hello there, LGF here for a quick review! I know quite a bit about poetry slams and the type of poem that goes in and how to maximize your poem ...

This is an interesting poem, with a good idea behind it but I do think it could have been revised a bit to really bring it up to the next ...

Hi there, LGF here for a quick review! Wow. The imagery used in your descriptions was breathtaking. Really. You wove the story together so well in such a limited amount ...

Hi there, LGF here for a quick review! I truly loved this, from start to finish. It was complex but I could tell it was raw, and written by a ...

Hi there, LGF here for a quick review! Wow, I absoloutely loved this. The shortness of it made the words sink in more and drew out the simplicity but also ...

Hi there, LGF here for a review. Neat little song you get here, hey? I liked it, and if I was giving you a grade for it I'd give you ...

Wow, this is an interesting song. The repetition of 'blood on the leaves' is really nice and gives the song a really good rhythm and you can see it being ...