Wow, this is an interesting song.
The repetition of 'blood on the leaves' is really nice and gives the song a really good rhythm and you can see it being sung by some alternative band or something.
I liked how you kind of had to figure out what was going on, and even after a few reads, not completely knowing what was going on. Songs don't always have to be clear, and so I liked that. It was different and had a haunting rhythm that makes you picture someone singing it.
My favorite lines;
Blood on the leaves
Even you don’t believe
The lies that you speak,
Overall, great song. Keep up the good work;
LGF
Points: 10
Reviews: 51
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