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Thanks to both of you. Glad I could make you look crazy, sunshinethatisme.

I love your poems. Thank you so much. Mind if I show a few people I know? *LIKES* Sorry I couldn't review.

in the her beautiful round eyes I think there was a mistake here.

Wow. I guess the story just speaks for itself. But just what were you trying to say by emphasizing quadrilateral? Did you mean like a scalene quadrilateral, 'imperfect'?

Thanks for the reviews guys! Pretty Crazy > I suppose it would. :D

Disturbing because of the last part. Perfect because of that too. So to you I give I like! Thanks for the read. Nothing to nit-pick content wise, listen to the ...

Thanks :D But do you think I should add rhyme?

Heya. This poem was really short so there's not much to review. Here's two cents: Inject some more personal emotion into it. Well, thanks for the read!

To quote Helena from A Midsummer Night's Dream: If only your frowns could teach my smiles.

Hey thanks BenFranks, Abigail_W! I think I still have to get to what your saying with the punctuation because it looks weird when only some lines have commas whilst others ...

Heya. I'm not very convinced. Now, I know this wasn't exactly a springtime poem, but if it is so yearning, then rather make it 3rd person, because yearning is usually ...

Maybe I ought to make a poem in reverse, Whisperer? Thanks everyone. Ayobaness.

Isha, correctitude. No, Kay.

Thank you Elinor, and by Pebbles (This is what I needed help with) I meant small memories. Those quiet summer afternoons, the beach, sharing a pizza... all those little things ...

This is the viewpoint of a Phoenix? I thought that was metaphorical!