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  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: Bubblegum

    Good morning/afternoon/evening/night! To start us off, I must say, I quite enjoyed your poem. The imagery was certainly superb, and it was fascinating to see your use of diction in ...

    Mar 29, 2023

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: i'm not sure i understand you just yet

    Good Morning, Afternoon, Evening, or Night! I wanted to start out by saying how much I loved your poem! It has such a beautiful feel; a sense of deep love ...

    Mar 19, 2023

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: my favorite book

    Good morning, afternoon, evening, or night! First, I would like to begin by saying your poem was very beautiful! I loved how simple and short it was, able to convey ...

    Nov 20, 2022

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: Is That Autumn I Hear?

    Good morning/afternoon/evening. I really liked your poem! It was the title, that caught my eye at first. Really draws people in! I love the imagery that you incorporate in your ...

    Jun 20, 2022

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic
    Re: Mourn Me Not

    Good morning/afternoon/evening That is quite the poem! I love your use of imagery, it allows the reader to picture exactly what is happening, and I know it’s a bit difficult ...

    Jun 17, 2022

  • Poetry » Humor, General
    Re: Life is eventually beautiful

    Good morning/afternoon/evening. To begin, I love the message behind your poem. You put it so simply, with no extra frilly words. Such a powerful message was put so simply, and ...

    Jun 13, 2022

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: An Ode to Liberty

    Good morning/evening/night. I loved your poem! The consistent rhyme scheme was just on point, and the flow of it? *chefs kiss* I love the structure of it! The first half ...

    Jun 4, 2022

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: i am the author of my own fate

    Good morning/afternoon/evening! Interpretation I really enjoyed this! It’s so abstract, and there are so many ways each line can be interpreted compared to whole of the poem. The theme of ...

    May 10, 2022

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other
    Re: Easy

    Good [insert greeting]! First off, I love the feel of your poem. It begins almost softly, lulling the reader into a feeling of deep love. Then it takes a darker ...

    Mar 6, 2022

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Girl on the wire

    Good (insert greeting)! To start off, I enjoyed your poem! I love the imagery it depicts! One thing I love about poetry is the way people can interpret it, and ...

    Feb 22, 2022

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: When I Sit In Class

    Good (insert greeting)! To start off, I would like to say how much I loved your poem! It so accurately describes what happens to your head in school! (Ironically, I’m ...

    Feb 17, 2022


  • Good (insert greeting based on your time)! I came across this poem a while back I really enjoyed it! I never got around to reviewing it, but I’m super glade ...

    Feb 12, 2022

  • Poetry » Humor, Culture
    Re: 'Writer' Limericks

    Good morning, afternoon, evening, night, or whatever applies to you in your specific time zone. Anyway, onto the review. I must say, I very much enjoyed reading your poem. It ...

    Jan 29, 2022

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical
    Re: Wonderland

    Good morning, afternoon, evening, night, or whatever applies to you in your specific time zone. Anyway, onto the review. I must say, that was really good! I loved the rhyme ...

    Nov 29, 2021

  • Poetry » General, Lyrical
    Re: go enjoy your life

    Good morning, afternoon, evening, night, or whatever applies to you in your respective time zone. Anyway, onto the review. This was a very nice poem! I enjoyed the touching topic! ...

    Nov 15, 2021


Look, a good poem is a poem that exists. Any poem you write is better than the poem you don't.
— WeepingWisteria