LittleLee

I'd like that!

Cool, cool.

Ducks in tow= kids following her as she went. Ahh, I misunderstood because there was a typo. It was a great poem, dude! I'm glad I read it.

I'll read it as soon as I can!

Hey, I didn't mean to say you "should" write in a certain way! I'm a teen, too, and I make an awful lot of mistakes. That part wasn't putting off, ...

Ah, and I'd also like to point out that the title is not an accurate representation of what you've written. You haven't listed out why you should love someone so ...

I'm very amused by how many times you started your critique with "Hmm..." XDDD

Hiii oh man this is a late reply I meant that it's my companion's choice to come back to me, that the path to my heart still remains open. I ...

Omg I didn't realise I had reviews on this poem XDD It definitely needs a proper structure, I'm going to work on this privately. Thank you so much for your ...

Mhm.

Don't you think a script-like format would be more apt for manga-style writing?

Ah, okay. I see. Have fun writing!

Hey! You said Lunas comment felt childish. She is only 15 and you will find out in the next chapter, her overall personality is still very childish I didn't mean ...

Thank you for the feedback! I made the flow choppy on purpose, actually, to intensify the feeling of confusion and being lost. I didn't want it to be a smooth ...

Man. This is a beautiful poem. It hit me too hard for me to think coherently enough to come up with a review, though. :) Keep writing, Blues. You're amazing.