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LittleLee

Life before death. Strength before weakness. Journey before destination.

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: Queen

    Good/morning/afternoon/evening, Staph! Welcome to the site! I'm Lee, and if you ever need any help around, just ask me. I am only 16 so I do need practice, give coins ...

    Sep 19, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Crowded Mountain (0)

    Hi, Perks! I don't think I've reviewed much of your work before, so this was something new. I agree with alliyah in that starting with a birthday caught my attention. ...

    Sep 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Snow White

    Hey there Rida, I'm Lee, and here to review your short poem! Welcome to the site, by the way. I hope you like it here! So, the title caught my ...

    Sep 19, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Literature Re: The Middle Years - Chapter One

    Hi, Vil! I'd love some reviews on this. And I'm here to comply with your wishes. (: I'll get right to it. Just please remember I'm just trying to be ...

    Sep 18, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I think my brain just died...

    Here I come to review another long-forgotten piece. I don't think I can actually criticise anything, and obviously asking doubts will confuse the both of us, so... Well, I can ...

    Sep 17, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Four Men Poem

    Hi there, Divyansh, welcome to YWS! It's nice to see you've already posted something. My overall impression is that the poem is sweet and cute. There are a few mistakes ...

    Sep 16, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Belonging

    Hi, Tanishka! I will begin by saying I really like this poem. I had a strange but pleasant feeling while reading this; the sense of semi-spirituality and a dreamer's mind ...

    Sep 15, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: The Wild Nest

    Heyyyy Grav! My first impression: Fried chickens. Yum. It's a nice little narrative. There's an interesting plot and an interesting way of putting it... And in light of the feathery ...

    Sep 14, 2020
  • Poetry » Chickens, General Re: Lovely Chicken

    This is so OLD and I don't think you'll read this, but MAN I needed this. I just began laughing at the sheer absurdity and randomness of it. I must ...

    Sep 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: Moonstruck

    Hi, Juan, I'm Lee! Welcome to YWS! This is a poem to be relished, a poem that can be something read before sleeping to set one's mind at peace. Simply ...

    Sep 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Music

    Hey, Aly! Wow. Just... Wow. It's an absolutely stunning little poem. I don't see a lot of your work of late (other than your fantastic art, of course) so this ...

    Sep 12, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Medieval Story

    Hey there, Buranko! I'm Lee, and here to review your poem. Welcome to YWS, of course! I'll get right to it. Please take whatever you find useful and ignore the ...

    Sep 11, 2020
  • Art » Romantic, Literature Re: Tears in July

    Welcome to YWS, paul! I hope you find the community here is to your tastes. I'm Lee, and here to review your wonderful piece of writing. Normally, I may point ...

    Sep 10, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: When the dragons ruled

    Hello, Momo! Wow, this is an interesting poem. Or should i say ballad? I liked the entire poem. Plot wise there wasn't really anything missing, and both beginning and ending ...

    Sep 9, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: to tell you that i know

    Hi Chanson, This is a rather delicate poem, and I don't have the right to judge certain... aspects of it. I do not have any first-hand experience, and don't want ...

    Sep 8, 2020


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