LittleCaroleen

Hi! I'm going to review this now. :) The idea behind this was rather clever, but I think the delivery was a little weak. I don't understand what you're referring ...

I love this. You could have some improvement if the words you used were a little stronger. I didn't really understand why you rhymed "face" with "face" but I guess ...

This is very well put together, mostly because it's true. I liked it a lot, although I felt like the rhythm was off in some places. Your word choice is ...

I love this poem so much. It reminds me of the Sand Man. Someone who protects dreams and sleep. There's such a softness to the poem that draws me into ...

This poem really pulls you in right away. I love the style that it's in. Your word choice is excellent. Your grammar is good. The end is a little confusing ...

For the most part, it's a good essay. You have a lot of grammar mistakes. I would go through and try to fix some of those. The content of your ...

I loved this. It was cute and original. It made me smile. It would be absolutely adorable to see an animated version of this. Everything about it was excellent. I ...

I love the beginning of the poem, but towards the end of it the rhyming feels a little forced. The theme of the poem is a little unclear. Are you ...

I like the story. It's very clever and original. The rhyming is a little off and it makes it hard to concentrate on what's going. It'll rhyme in random places ...

Okay. This was very interesting to read. I'm very interested in the subject and I'm guessing this was a report for school. If it is for school then I recommend ...

I like this poem a lot. I love how you compare the sky to velvet. Such a lovely comparison. Some of the rhyming seems a little forced and awkward. The ...

For the most part I like it. You might wanna use some better adjectives. The rhythm of the poem tends to be very off. Sometimes you rhyme and sometimes you ...

A very cute and happy love poem. The rhythm of the poem seems a little off. Sometimes there's rhyme and sometime's there's not. It's very distracting when reading. It bothers ...

Wow. I really love this poem. It's very soft spoken and sad. I think everyone can relate to it. I really like the line "I still am their little girl/and ...

This is really good. I love it. Nobody really uses second person anymore, so little in fact that they took it away as an "official" writing style. I like how ...