LittleCaroleen

I can't say that I liked this too well. It was a good story and very well written, but I'm not sure if I can handle the sadness of it ...

Woah. I read a theory once about what happens if your soul mate dies before you get a chance to meet them. They would follow you around and protect you. ...

I loved it. A very well told love story. I like the spaces that you use towards the end it. It leaves a long enough space that will let your ...

This is really good for a first poem. I think it could be better. The second half is way more enticing than the first. For some reason the first half ...

I love this poem. I love the way it drags on, kind of like time does. It's very simple and very real at the same time. I absolutely loved this ...

This is both amazing and tragic because I think everyone can relate to it. I love all of the adjectives that you used, because they described each individual thing so ...

I actually love this a lot. It's not really poetry, or I don't see that way anyways. But don't take that to insult. It reminds me of a rap the ...

Woah. This is sad. For some reason when I read this I think of Vincent Van Gogh and all of the things he did to make himself happy. Like he ...

I love it! It's extrememly soft spoken and sad. It feels as though it's being whispered in your ears as you read it. The second stanza has rhyme scheme and ...

This poem is very difficult for me to read. I don't like how you left out a lot of punctuation. I think you should have better spacing between your stanzas ...

Okay. I like your writing style and your word choice is really good. Try using a thesaurus if you want to spice it up a little more. The story itself ...

Okay. This poem is a little unclear. I don't really like the formatting of it. It's hard to concentrate on it. Your grammar and puncutation is a little rough. You ...

Woah. I really love this! It's got a certain kind of softness to it, yet it's also very adventurous. The rhythm of the first stanza is a little off, but ...

Oh wow. I'll try to be nice about this because this is your first poem. But there needs to be some major improvement. Your grammar isn't the greatest. You seem ...

I love this. It's so inspiring. I can definitely relate to it. I love the energy and the dreaming behind it all. There isn't much rhythm to it, but the ...