LittleCaroleen

Loved this. Very well-written. However there was a part that sounded a little strange. "Some stay, the rest will soon forgotten." Did you mean "will soon be forgotten" or "were ...

I'm not sure how I feel about this. I both really like it and don't like it at the same time and I can't put my finger on what I ...

Very powerful. I like how it said something about the government shutting down. That would make sense for America with all of this strangeness happening. I wonder how old he ...

The very last sentence doesn't make much sense. I think it would be better if you said, "Have you?". That would flow better. The line above that is very long ...

Ohh. This is a very short story... I like how you rephrased the "what kills you makes you stronger" phrase. I absolutely hate it, because it doesn't make me feel ...

Woah. Words can't describe how much I love this story. it's so beautiful and so sad. I thought about Heaven and everything throughout and it was very confusing. You tie ...

I like this. So few people tell such a beautiful story through poetry. A story is implied, but so little defined. I love it! I liked the reference to Judas, ...

Aww. This makes me sad. Because I wish all of my friends could be considered good friends by other people. I don't know why they aren't. They speak to all ...

I liked this. The rhyme made it so much better, and I typically don't like poems that rhyme! However, at some points it was slightly off. Sorry you haven't been ...

There's a great softness to this poem that draws you in. I really like it all the way around. So, I noticed you needed a comma after You need commas ...

I LOVE this! The idea of combining science into poetry is simply beautiful. Everyone thinks to seem they're so different, but I don't think so. I don't think I have ...

I love this poem so much. It's so deep and raw. I love it so so so much. The spacing is a little off. I don't like how you ended ...

This was a decent poem, but it was hard to follow because of your punctuation. If you want it to continue on into one sentence, then you should replace some ...

I like it a fair amount. It's very beautifully composed, but I'm not sure about the rhyme scheme. I can see that there isn't one, but it's distracting that there ...

I thought this was a decent enough poem, but I think it could use some tweaking. There are parts where the poem doesn't even rhyme. A lot of the rhyming ...