LittleCaroleen

I really like the imagery used her. The figurative language is really good. I love how relatable the whole thing is, because I think we all know what it's like ...

I think you have some good lyrics here. It points out a lot of political problems in our world, and it's kind of heart-breaking to read. The casualness of the ...

This is written very well. I love the imagery you used in this. It's beautifully written. The only thing that really bothered me was that you didn't break up the ...

So, this is a pretty good story. Not one that I would typically choose to read, but it was well written and had a good plot. You should start a ...

Very clever. I'm not sure what I was expecting, honestly. I'm sure you're really not looking for reviews, but let's look at this anyways. Since this is more of a ...

This was amazing. I really loved it. You did an outstanding job writing this. When you say, "You are not grocery shelf cans/to live by labels or brands" it reminds ...

This is really beautiful. I love it. I really want to listen to it. The part where it goes into the bridge seems really awkward, but I'm not a musician ...

Hey! I really loved the flow of this poem. It wasn't perfectly smooth, and it threw me off, but it still flowed. Especially in the second to last stanza. It ...

I am so thankful for this. Oh my goodness. You have no idea how relatable this is. My brother-in-law always tries to tell me what to do and judging me ...

This is a really good poem. It shows how people who seem so perfect aren't what they seem. Or maybe because you capitalized "almighty greatness", my first thought was to ...

I'm interested in this. It kind of reminds me of "The Poker House". It's a movie starring Jennifer Lawerence. You should see, good movie. Anyways, in the second paragraph you ...

Woah. I really like this. Looking in on what most consider "the perfect family", but you show that they aren't perfect. That they're broken or maybe just breaking. My favorite ...

I was intrigued by the title, so I decided to read it, but I don't understand how the title works with the story. Is it suppose to mean that we ...

I think you did a good job. Especially since this is one of your first time writing a Haiku. I'm a little confused though. Are you refusing to be a ...

How very powerful your piece of art is! It tugs and tugs on me. It's the kind of poem that lingers over and sets in on your skin. How very ...