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Re: i think it's crazy
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Jun 25, 2015
This is a really interesting poem Not all poetry has to be sane, you know what I mean? This is just mindless and there is a beauty to this. I ... - Re: Love Chapter 3 {Edited} Dec 13, 2014
- Re: Love Chapter 2 {Edited} Dec 13, 2014
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Re: School Frustrations.
I enjoyed this poem a lot. I also hated school so I entered into independent study. However, I still feel your pain. I like how you expressed your disdain for ...
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Re: Bangladesh
I really enjoyed your poem. I think it is really interesting that you are from Bangladesh. You are really good at writing. This poem definitely painted a picture. Even though ...
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Re: Freedom
I really should be going to bed right now because I am really tired. However, I wanted to read some poetry, but I told myself that I wasn't going to ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Bloodshot Eyes with a Fake Smile for Disguise
Uhhmm, yeah, I am suppose to be doing my school work right now, but I was distracted by reading your poem. This was infact so good that I had to ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: discomposure
You did I an excellent job. The contrast in this is perfect and well done. Even though this is a poem or story about infatuation you didn't make it like ...
Sep 16, 2014 -
Re: Don't Forget Our Past
Your writing style is good. You also have very good structure. You right in third person very well. Ive noticed that a lot of people will attempt to write in ...
Sep 10, 2014 -
Re: Love Chapter 4 {Edited}
I cant wait to read more. Once again I love your writing style. I do agree, however, that you should change the title. Ot takes away from your story. Even ...
Sep 10, 2014 -
Re: Love Chapter 1 {Edited}
Your writing style is impeccable. You right in first person very well. Ive noticed that a lot of people will attempt to write in first person, but they overdo it, ...
Sep 9, 2014
