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LionessQueen

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: i think it's crazy

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    This is a really interesting poem Not all poetry has to be sane, you know what I mean? This is just mindless and there is a beauty to this. I ...

    Jun 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Love Chapter 3 {Edited}

    Dec 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: Love Chapter 2 {Edited}

    Dec 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: School Frustrations.

    I enjoyed this poem a lot. I also hated school so I entered into independent study. However, I still feel your pain. I like how you expressed your disdain for ...

    Dec 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Review, General Re: Bangladesh

    I really enjoyed your poem. I think it is really interesting that you are from Bangladesh. You are really good at writing. This poem definitely painted a picture. Even though ...

    Dec 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Freedom

    I really should be going to bed right now because I am really tired. However, I wanted to read some poetry, but I told myself that I wasn't going to ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Bloodshot Eyes with a Fake Smile for Disguise

    Uhhmm, yeah, I am suppose to be doing my school work right now, but I was distracted by reading your poem. This was infact so good that I had to ...

    Oct 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: discomposure

    You did I an excellent job. The contrast in this is perfect and well done. Even though this is a poem or story about infatuation you didn't make it like ...

    Sep 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Don't Forget Our Past

    Your writing style is good. You also have very good structure. You right in third person very well. Ive noticed that a lot of people will attempt to write in ...

    Sep 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: Love Chapter 4 {Edited}

    I cant wait to read more. Once again I love your writing style. I do agree, however, that you should change the title. Ot takes away from your story. Even ...

    Sep 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Romantic Re: Love Chapter 1 {Edited}

    Your writing style is impeccable. You right in first person very well. Ive noticed that a lot of people will attempt to write in first person, but they overdo it, ...

    Sep 9, 2014


Painting is poetry that is seen rather than felt, and poetry is painting that is felt rather than seen.
— Leonardo da Vinci