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LionessQueen

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: i think it's crazy

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    This is a really interesting poem Not all poetry has to be sane, you know what I mean? This is just mindless and there is a beauty to this. I ...

    Jun 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Love Chapter 3 {Edited}

    Dec 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: Love Chapter 2 {Edited}

    Dec 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: School Frustrations.

    I enjoyed this poem a lot. I also hated school so I entered into independent study. However, I still feel your pain. I like how you expressed your disdain for ...

    Dec 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Review, General Re: Bangladesh

    I really enjoyed your poem. I think it is really interesting that you are from Bangladesh. You are really good at writing. This poem definitely painted a picture. Even though ...

    Dec 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Freedom

    I really should be going to bed right now because I am really tired. However, I wanted to read some poetry, but I told myself that I wasn't going to ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Bloodshot Eyes with a Fake Smile for Disguise

    Uhhmm, yeah, I am suppose to be doing my school work right now, but I was distracted by reading your poem. This was infact so good that I had to ...

    Oct 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: discomposure

    You did I an excellent job. The contrast in this is perfect and well done. Even though this is a poem or story about infatuation you didn't make it like ...

    Sep 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Don't Forget Our Past

    Your writing style is good. You also have very good structure. You right in third person very well. Ive noticed that a lot of people will attempt to write in ...

    Sep 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: Love Chapter 4 {Edited}

    I cant wait to read more. Once again I love your writing style. I do agree, however, that you should change the title. Ot takes away from your story. Even ...

    Sep 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Romantic Re: Love Chapter 1 {Edited}

    Your writing style is impeccable. You right in first person very well. Ive noticed that a lot of people will attempt to write in first person, but they overdo it, ...

    Sep 9, 2014


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