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Hey,Davwilson!!Lily here for a review. Hopped in after readiing your post on Writer's Ed. At first I have to say this is such a touching piece,to be more precise 'heartwrenching' ...

Hey currey0, Lily here for a review. Well..I must say a good try. The story concept is good. I mean it's good that you have a very different plot because ...

Hey Lupa22, it's lily here for a review. Good poem,I really liked the first stanza and the way you described fairs.Your poem is so relatable. All most every child has ...

WOooWWWW!!!!!That's something I popped out of my mouth when I read it. I never really knew that one could describe everything so clearly as in your poem.Wish I could give ...

Hey Charlottes..! Lily here for a review. Mesmerizing!! Perfect!! Wonderful!! ;) This is all that I can say when I see you story.It's simply beautiful. The most amazing part was ...

Hey Sillia, Lily here for a review. :) WOW!! That's what I first said when I read your poem. I really love your poem. Especially the way you've written, it ...

Hey Snazzy,It's Lily again doing another review of yours ;) I have to admit this poem is really awesome!! It is indeed very realistic. It isn't a fairy tale or ...

Woooowww!!!!( I think I need to add more 'O's to that word);) You got me frozen for while...It's I think the best poem I've read of beautifully described the power ...

Hey Snazzy..here again for another review. This poem doesn't really much doesn't have any central theme or idea unlike your other poems.But I'm sure it'd do good for Kid's books.Whatever ...

Hey there Snazzy! Time for a review. This poem is sooo realistic..,people ask us to socialize ,speak our mind out,feel home and stuff but, the minute we do it...that's it....loudmouths ...

Hey marmalade, Lily here for a quick review.. The poem is simply beautiful. Especially the way you started your poem with a question,that brings up curiosity in the reader's mind ...

Hey,JBangsgaard!! Lily here for a review.It's a really good poem that actually drags you into imagination and puts you into the writer's pathetic situation.Loved the way you showed your misery ...

Hey,Lily here for a review. You got me frozen buddy. It was just Awesome!!!! The stanzas which kept fading until the end...really speaks of how merciless time can be. Anyways ...

Hey,Amelie. It's lily here for a review.And I think this is the first poem of yours I'm reviewing. It's a good poem!!!...Seriously we never get enough of being 'happy'.We can ...

Hey,Anngelalu!! Lily here for a review. A good poem..one of the shortest poems I read.It's kinda humorous though..if related to homework(in your description) or drinking milk as in my case ...