Lightsong

Aww, so sad. Why are you making a sad story? Now I feel sad to review this piece. :( Well, I will go straight to the protagonist. He knew his ...

Hey, again. :) This story of yours is interesting like the one before. So it's Japanese martial art now, eh? The katana, and all. I find Lilly's sharp comments on ...

Ooh, a vampire story. I'll review this one if you don't mind. ;) it's different from Twilight, thank goodness. Evie woke up in the house of vampires, Versee and and ...

Ooh, a vampire story. I'll review this one if you don't mind. ;) it's different from Twilight, thank goodness. Evie woke up in the house of vampires, Versee and and ...

Hey. I'm here for a review, so bear with me for a moment. :) This is an interesting chapter. I haven't read the previous ones, so perhaps my understanding in ...

Hmm, I love this poem. Almost everything in it is my favourite. The first line itself has already captured my interest. "I am the captain of my character" is my ...

Hey, allow me to give you my lame review. :) I will just touch on the aspect of dialgoues. There is just too much of them, probably because you have ...

Aww, I like it. Not as much suspenseful as the previous chapter, but it has some developments going on. I liked how the conversation between Chelia and her mother, Irma ...

Just one stanza? Oh well. I'm aware that haiku consists of short three-lines stanzas, but having just one seems too short for me. I like the idea of this haiku. ...

Hey. :) I'm going to review your story. For a short story, it's too short. However, the theme is clear, the ideas are apparent, and the plots are defined. The ...

Hey, I'm here for a short review. I'm going to touch about the content of the prologue (I assume this is a prologue) and the dialogues. For content, or the ...

Hmm, after reading the other's comments, I admit I have no knowledge about the Christianity's version of the apple story (in Islam, Adam and Eve ate it because they heard ...

Hey, I'm here to make a review. :D Wear your seat belt very tightly, please. Okay, so the theme is interesting. It's about the persona wanting her parents to understand ...

I love this poem. For once, it's about romance. It's about a couple with grieving hearts, or sadness which pierces mine so deeply. I want to blame you for making ...

I am sorry if my review will be somewhat offensive, as I tend to give one with full honesty. Based on the description of the poem that I have read, ...