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Lightsong

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Cursed, Pt. 4.1

    Okay! My review here will touch upon the plot and, well, the Irma picking up shards of the plate. You're developing Irma's character which is good because we want to ...

    May 20, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Dirty Little Secret

    In my opinion, there are pros and cons of involving one self into incest. I dismiss them completely since I dislike incest due to many reasons. But this story really ...

    May 19, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Greatest Game

    Hey, am here to leave a review! The quotes and introduction lines are nice. It gives me hints of what to expect. The "lay face-first" scenario is redundant here but ...

    May 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Do Not Envy Poets

    Hmm, I don't know much to say about this poem. I know why you made this poem though. XD Well, you presented a... sad view about poets. They are "producers ...

    May 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural Re: Prologue - The Lonely Wolf

    Ooh, supernatural novel. Me interested. I hope yours isn't going to have a pile of clichés. Well, what to review? The prologue is short. You have mentioned the girl's appearance ...

    May 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Crimson Blades

    I've read this a while ago and didn't leave you with a review. I feel like I've sinned. I like this story. I like its intensity, twists and the betrayals ...

    May 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Silver Lining - Chapter 7

    Hey, I'm here to leave a review for you. :) As a chapter, I think this one is fine. It doesn't have too much descriptions, they're enough. Maybe you can ...

    May 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 37 Part 1

    Well. That was so many info I had to process. First of all, I have to admit that I'm a bit uncomfortable reviewing this chapter since I haven't read the ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Anew (Draft 4)

    Well, reading this when I'm reading The Ways of Kings really makea me want to use the novel as reference. Anyway, I'm here to make a review! This chapter looks ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: Don't Touch My Books

    Oh god, I dislike people who touch my book too (well, except those who borrow it). I fear they would harm it. This poem is very relatable to me. It's ...

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Other » Other, Politics Re: Argumentative Speech

    This is an interesting argument. I'm sorry to be unable to relate though since in my school, the canteen and cooperation site don't sell carbonated drink as much as they ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Literature, Spiritual Re: Vive Memor Leti.

    Um, I don't have much to say. I don't know if I can review this piece since I don't really get. It. You use bombastic words to show something that ...

    Apr 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: A Chance Encounter

    I like the concept of this story. This sort of stories that talks about mythical gods is always my interest. That being said, I wonder if this talks about gods ...

    Apr 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Something I Realized

    Hey. I'm here to rip apart your poem into tiny little pieces, and I'm going to eat them. I felt like everyone here is mine, But I failed to understand ...

    Apr 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: clock!radio

    Hey Widdershins. I'm here to reply back the favor! You've helped a lot. ;) I like this poem. As a non-native English speaker, it eases my mind reading a simplistic ...

    Apr 1, 2015


akdsjfh you know that feeling where you start writing a scene but then you get bored with the scene so you move on and start writing a different scene and then you get bored with that scene so you move on to an entirely different WIP and then you get bored with that so you move on-
— AceassinOfTheMoon