Lightsong

Hey, it's me to review as requested! As per usual, I would check your grammar first. :) The Enchanted Forest was a large beautiful forest located east of Cambroxzen Castle ...

I have been meaning to review this, so I'm here to review! 8) First of all, I want to praise you on how you manage to give us interesting bits ...

Hey! I'm here to review this lovely poem. :D What can say about it when there's a stanza perfectly covers it? But no, this little poem is not about what ...

Hey, I'm here to review! You go girl! :D This is a nice way to react to someone who talked behind your back. You forgot an apostrophe in "doesnt". This ...

When you left me speechless and was in mixed emotion "Was" should be changed with "were". Once upon a time we both got shivered "Got"? Got shivered by what? You ...

Hey, it's me to review! :D I am not teacher; I am someone else. "I am not teacher..." sounds awkward. "I am not a teacher" sounds smoother. That's it. The ...

Hey, I'm here to give a good review (or so I thought). ;) Penelope, a group of glamorous, gossiping women and the Lady of the Manor, Lady Thane, were all ...

The handfull of teens gathered under the few tress here were had their fingers knotted in another's hair, kissing and grabbing one another in their private areas and what was ...

The sun was only about to rise when Sherlock had gotten up. You don't need the word "only". The meaning is still the same without it. Imagine if that’s the ...

Do I need to chuckle a bit after reading this? The last stanza reads a bit funny. ._. Anyway, here I am to review! The poem is short, and going ...

Hey, it's me to review! I like to be the first to review as well, but being second is fine. .u. The driver is sinking his teeth into a deep ...

"MINE!!!" Silverdeath roared, reaching forward as though to crush Socrates between his hands. There are exclamation marks (three of them) to show that he roars, so the block letters are ...

Hey! It's me coming here to review for the Review Day! B) First of all, I just want to congratulate you for the wonderful concept you have brought here regarding ...

"What I am about to tell you has been kept in the dark for centuries, for whatever reason, you do not reveal this information to anyone outside this very room," ...

Hey! I'm here to review for Review Day! :) First of all, I want to say I like this story. I like the characters - Rionach, Alexander, and Arianna are ...