LeutnantSchweinehund

I'll give you a quick review, because there's not much else to be said. The other reviewers pretty much said it all, so I'll just add my quick thoughts. Your ...

Too short to really review properly, I think, but sure. I'll give it my best. It's not really poem-like, I'd say. I'll admit that despite not liking free verse at ...

Good NT quote. Lovely read, the Gospels, all four of 'em. Great to see someone write about religion on here. Glad I'm not the only one. I like the topic, ...

Alright, let's get to it. I'll try to point out anything I deem flawed, and, of course, I'll tell you what I think you did right as well. It's actually ...

Well hey, it has meter and rhymes. Thank the Lord that at least someone still respects meter and rhymes. The meter isn't 100% consistent and breaks here and there, but ...

Haven't done a review in some time. Might as well get back into practice. So... Let's see then. Color Coded Feelings and Real Fake Things, eh? Interesting choice of words ...

Well it's certainly nonsensical. I can say that much, that's for sure. Though I don't really know what it's trying to convey. As in, I don't much understand its meaning. ...

Not exactly sure what it's supposed to be. I expected a script to a play, but now I'm left confused. Was it meant to be a poem? If so, it ...

You ought to do something about that formatting. It's not very good. The font is nice, but having to scroll horizontally is unpleasant at best. I'll look past grammar issues ...

Well the ending was certainly rather unique. I think it sets apart your work from other love poems, because it actually shows the more reasonable and realistic outcome of hope. ...

Intriguing. It's not a commonly explored topic, I think. Of course, self-hatred or just the very pains of reaching maturity are a common occurrence in poetry, especially on a site ...

I'll try to stick around for the whole novel and help you out, since I really think that if you fix the glaring issues, it might be something. I'm sorry ...

I'll give a quick review. But first of all... Astronomy nerd rant. I know it's fantasy and all, but 512 million SM is far too much, even for fantasy. Considering ...

As an amateur astronomer with a great interest in history, I quite liked it. Certainly, it wasn't flawless. Some parts seemed a tad rushed, others too long. The rhythm of ...

Most certainly, there is no point to anything. A philosophy called nihilism. I think there's some truth to it. I'm still not sure why you used "who" and not "which" ...