LeoPenrhythm

Heyyyy!!! Leo here to review:-) Sylvia path "Mirror".....this piece of yours reminds me of it...the thing i liked about it is that it is simple, straight with no deviations and ...

helllloooo!!!! leo here to review your work... To be honest, I didn't exactly get what your poem is about...What does the room stand for???? Nothingness??? Is it something philosophical??? having ...

Leo Here to review:-) Simple and start of...liked the rapid progression of the poem...apart from one or two lines where there is a gradual fall of scale...rhythm which we say...the ...

No rhythm.....Still an awesome job!!!!!!! Leo to review:-) "Do not let it wither. Keep me safe, Keep me warm." When i read those lines, it makes me feel a sensation ...

I see you are a very good poet....the opening lines speaks about it...the brevity of memories...a direct expression of the human life and its ephemerality....."Footprints on wet soggy mud," good ...

Leo here!!!!! love draws me completely into its arms whenever it is i am here.. I see you have made a nice attempt in understanding the frailties and travails of ...

LeoPenrhythm here to review!!!!! Okay, on a serious note, good writing...I like the picture that you draw of the girl sitting, all broken, feeling cold ( referring to the hard ...

Helllooooo!!!! Leo here to review your work... To begin with, will say it is a good piece, but with a lot of mistakes....I "love" using the word has a feeling ...

Different, interesting and painful to the eyes....The reference to the abuses through indirect words, good job....the starting lines are very well begins with a demand for justification by the little ...

It's good to be stupid! :-) The title of the story is very unique..even the story itself...The humour played out in the letter is very good... The line "What makes ...

Have got nothing to say...(not because i didn't understand anything) but because your poem speaks more than these mere words and is quite touching...I like the title of your poem...The ...

The first poem that comes to my mind when reading this is Browning's "The Last is kind of similar to it...A request of love not to leave and go...quite touching... ...

Hello There!!!! Here to review your poem:-) A good job!! Good theme of the poem....But ( I don't know why, this word "but" always has a bad connotation when related ...

Good piece of writing...I love this feeling called love...You have carved a beautiful picture out of this although it is a bit painful..But, what is love if there is no ...

Really touching...You can be (if you are than it's well and good) a very passionate lover:-)....The feeling of detachment, of being separated from your lover by that natural force called ...