LeoPenrhythm

Hey, here is a short review of your poem by me. The idea that went on to write the poem was a good one and very well expressed. While at ...

hellloooo.........here to review your poem....I quite liked the symbolism of rain that you have employed....However, I felt the poem too randomized...different things forcefully attempted to connect a

Helloooo Newbie, Leo here to review:-) This is a good piece...i liked reading it..."But" the thing is that there is not much to review....this chapter is very short, more like ...

Hellllloooooo Leo here to review:-) Good Job!!!! That will be my first impression on your poem. have got nothing much to say, just like your poem, just that a cinquain ...

Leo here to review!!! :-) First of all, the picture reminds me of the story of pandora opening the box, which she was not supposed to... Coming to your poem, ...

Heyyy......Leo here to save your work from the green room....and review of course!! :-) A good narrative, one about a very interesting topic...Gossip girl...sounds good... "But" i think your work ...

Leo here to review.... :-(( It is very saddening...a good poignant piece... I love the part of the guilt, the remorse that usually people feel when they are the lone ...

Helllloooooo, Leo here to review Short, sweet and simple:-) these are the first words that I would like to use for this piece.. Just a thing, I didn't quite get ...

Helllloooooo, Leo here to review:-) I found your piece a bit more descriptive than it should have been...I felt as if you focused more on details that i think were ...

Hellllooooo, Leo here to review.... This is an interesting piece although the context goes over my head...maybe because it is the first chapter and we didn't get to know much ...

Helllloooooo. Leo here to review.... First of all, nice imageries....i specially love this line "While she slept, I held her hand Watching her chest collapse and expand" It creates a ...

Helllloooooo, Leo here to review... This is a good poem to read, "but" i feel it is more of a diary entry than a poem!! I love the adventurous mood ...

Hiiii, Leo here to review.... To start off, i would say that the poem left me doubtful in a couple of lines.... "Random little buzzers shock My memory to swing ...

Helllloooo, Leo here to review...Nice sonnet in the shakespearean format...Nice use of words, giving and old touch to it by using old words...I see...That's good:-) I like the opening lines ...

Hellloooo, Leo here to review.... I found this poem to be good and a bit different from other poems...."But" there are some problems which make it more different from the ...