Lenora742

Hey There! Thought I'd leave a review for this lovely poem you wrote. First and Foremost: Your title is what drew me in. It's beautiful and expresses the core meaning ...

Hey there! So, I really love this poem :) It has great flow and rhythm, and I couldn't stop reading it till the end! I feel like, as LogicAndObjections stated, ...

"I don't know what else to say, Because " I'm sorry " is starting to seem so lame." That line, oh my gosh. So many love poems (*cough* like mine ...

"Why are we so stubborn?" Is a question I often wonder, myself! Maybe it's in human nature to feel like you can do anything on your own. Your last two ...

I genuinely enjoyed this story! The thought of loving someone who only exists inside your mind is... lonely actually. I mean, The only time she could ever see him is ...

Hi there! So first of all: I absolutely adore this poem! The comparisons give it an excellent touch. I love in the first stanza, how you compare the sun's light ...

I rather enjoyed reading this...poem? It's realistic, and I can definitely relate!Trying to discover what we feel, and what those feelings mean can be a real dilemma. I often find ...

Hello there! Just thought I'd stop by and review this lovely piece you wrote! :D I love this poem. I can relate to it (I think many kids/teens/adults can too). ...

Hey there!Here to review your piece, as requested :) I noticed two mistakes in the second paragraph, that I'm not sure if you meant to do or not. ", then ...

This poem is so amazing, that I'm almost at a loss for words~ The ending was perfect, and the lines are still lingering in my head!I feel empathy for the ...

Very well written story, with excellent structure and grammar. I felt so much empathy for Hope, The whole time I was reading I wanted to just do something for her ...

I liked this story, overall. A few things that drew my attention though, were that every once in awhile, you had run on sentences, and some words are repeated. Also, ...

Wow... I didn't expect that ending. It was so... beautifully dark. It's kind of poetic actually, the way he jumps instead of her (Even though, that may not stop her ...

This is really good! Although, as kaitlynnbrown21 said, I'm not totally sure what is happening. The wording is pretty good, and your vocabulary is obviously fantastic. Reading further towards the ...

Such a wonderful poem, and with powerful meaning! It was a delight to read. The rhythm and flow was perfect, in my opinion, and the ending was so perfectly written. ...