LemonyIce

Hey, thanks for the review! :D And actually, it wasn't meant to be serious. ^^" I think I'll try working on it a bit more, though! Thanks again!

Hey, thanks for the review! :D And actually, it wasn't meant to be serious. ^^" I think I'll try working on it a bit more, though! Thanks again!

Hey Macy! I'm Lemony, here to review~ Alright, I actually really like this poem. It's quite good, but I have a few nitpicks. First, over here: The princess had slept ...

Hey Shadow! Thank you so much for the review! :D It really helped and I'll try correcting everything you told me to. :3 ~Lemony

Oh, one more thing. I think your title was supposed to be "What am I suppose d to do?" It's a small thing, but important, all the same! I hope ...

Thank you Rainn! :D

Thanks for the review! Yeah, the third paragraph was divided into sentences because there was a word limit and I needed to reach that limit. xD Thanks, though! :D ~Lemony

Hey Metalmauzen! So one major problem I had with this story was the tense consistency. You kept changing the tense of the story from past, to present and then back ...

Gill! Ooh, this is getting better and better! Buuut, a couple of typos here and there. Rickie didn’t protest as I took him to the hallowed mountain that contained the ...

Awww!! This is sweet!! I love it. Only one thing to tell you:- Run away with me to Neverland , Where everything shines, the sky, the sand . Where pixies, ...

This was such a beautiful poem. I think it's simply amazing how much you expressed with words. It's wonderful really beautiful. I love it!

Hi there! I really like this poem. It's quite good and I think you did a really good job expressing yourself. It's quite obvious that you love to sing just ...

Awesome! When I read "Black hair" I thought you meant me but then i realized of course it wasn't :D It's coooll and fuunnyyy!

This is so sweet!!!! I love it! It's a really good poem!!!! You should write more like this!