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I like the play on words with "mattered" whether it was intentional or not. It was just neat. Also, the way you reference the world as her, as if she ...

Hi, the way the storm was symbolic of an unleash of dreadful feelings was pretty cool. I just have a problem with the lack of commas. Sorry to be such ...

I love vampires. This drew me back to the time I actually watched the old film Nosferatu and nearly wet myself hahaha. However, it only did that much really...you have ...

Wooow, that is like a tonne of thoughts melded into a second of cognition. Sweet! That is exactly what goes around in my mind when people judge me! You efficiently ...

I thought of the Hunger Games at the second line hahah. This was an awesome poem. Deep and original piece of work, well done. My favourite line would have to ...

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I was totally engrossed in the content of this poem. Was this drawn from reality? If so I am sorry, and that will make it harder to ...

Hi, Legy here, Ok, where to start....what are nights? It seems like the whole story is about nights, yet I have no idea what the heck they are. I don't ...

Hi, Legy here, This poem was quite beautiful, but a little contorted with confusion. What I mean by that is, there were certain words you incorporated in the piece that ...

Hi, this piece was rather seductive and lustrous, quite attractive to the eye when you get into reading it. However, the way the poem was set out was a real ...

Hi, you write pretty well. However, there is very little punctuation used in this poem, and the random change of font looks scrappy, and annoys me quite a bit. The ...

Wooooooooooooooooow man, your vocabulary stunned me. I don't think I could ever write with such class as you have. Heck! You used some words I've never even heard of! Hahaha! ...

Beautiful, just beautiful. I liked what images that were projected into my head because of your simplistic yet divine descriptive phrases you had. You have a real knack for poetry ...

You have a way with words, no doubt about that. But you seem to have forgotten about paragraphs!-Dun dun duuuun- so how about you edit this and space it out ...

Heeeey man, nice job on the poem, very real and heartbreaking. I sensed a lot of anger beneath the words. But emotion is what awesomises writing. Good job. Oh! I ...

Oooooh delightful! I loved reading this poem, as it triggered so much emotion inside! I love how you kept it imple and comprehensible. By the way, you had some brilliant ...