Leapy

I think this was a very nice, simple poem. And I enjoyed reading it thoroughly. The only thing I think might need a bit of correction is: You're the only ...

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Ok! First off I'd like to remind you of the 2:1 ratio on posting and reviews, just remember the more you review the more people will review your work. ^.^ ...

Well I think I have to agree with Moon Jumper on some of this. It was really confusing to read all the way through when you never mention names. Though ...

Well geez, I think killthewitch has already loaded you up on all the corrections, lol. So Ill try and not just repeat everything...haha. I really liked this, and Im excited ...

Wow.... Im just speechless. This was really beautiful, and terribly sad all at the same time. You have so much emotion in this it almost brought me to tears. Its ...

Its a bit strange to read lyrics to an actual song at the beginning of a poem, because you start to get on the song track and then your poem ...

"I know what you are attempting to do. I hope you are aware that it will not work unless I allow it. I can leave whensoever I desire, which may ...

I will agree with denj and CaitE that this was a very well written piece. The only thing that stuck out to me as odd was this: From the shadows, ...

1. Does this make you want to read more? Yes. 2. Is there anything I could make better? Not just that, but my perfect devil of a Mistress is probably ...

This was very interesting. But to me it lacked in the end. It didn't go anywhere and didn't really make you feel a sense of ...hmm... "complete-ness" when it was ...

hoping with all he might Just a simple typo here. It should be "Her". But I completely agree with what Castle said. Its a very emotional piece and has a ...

You pack you bag Just a misspelled word it should be "Your" not "You" Its abit odd, but still mesmerizing. Im really not sure what to tell you to work ...

I really loved this, so nicely done first off. The only thing I would suggest is in the last bit: And so I soon came to another branch In the ...

You like me and never want to leave me You lover her and can't ever leave her Just replace lover with just love Fore no one waits for someone else ...