Published November 24, 2008
People
The strangest beings
Do you see dogs comitting genocide?
Raccoons building bombs?
No.
People are cruel.
People
The strangest beings
Do you see cats falling in love?
Birds buying jewelry for their beloved?
No.
People are romantic
People
The strangest beings
Do you see squirrels buying diet books?
Foxes becoming bulemic?
No.
People are self-concious.
People
The strangest beings
Do you see snakes creating computers?
Mice using iPhones?
No.
People are smart.
People
The strangest beings
Do you see hamsters painting masterpieces?
Gophers writing symphonies?
No.
People are creative.
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I was thinking the same thing when I posted it, but I'm still thinking about how to end it. I'll edit it as soon as I think of a good last stanza.
thanks for the review!
This was very interesting. But to me it lacked in the end. It didn't go anywhere and didn't really make you feel a sense of ...hmm... "complete-ness" when it was done. Unless there is more to it, then that I can understand.
But like I said, it was very interesting, and I hope you extend it even just a bit longer. Try to captivate your readers with your last sentence that it makes them go, "Hmm... I like that."
Just a suggestion- please keep it up!
~Leapy