Laurenh6

Hey! I'm here to give you a review.. Right, my first impressions of this - I was drawn in by the title because I was unsure as to how you'd ...

Helloo there! I clicked on this story because I saw it was under the genre of horror and I love all that jazz! So I gave it a read and ...

Hey there ! I just wanted to say this is really cool and quirky as a poem, like how you've set it up as a chat room is awesome. Sorta ...

Hello, I was really drawn in by your poem title and wondered what it could be about.. After reading it , things still remain mysterious and I'm intrigued but also ...

Heyya! I just wanted to say, I read the review below about how you're "contradicting yourself" n all that jazz - and I'd like to say how I totalllly disagreee! ...

Hey there ! First of all I'd like to say I found this kinda relatable - mainly stanza 2 because I am quite a defensive person sometimes xD .. But ...

Hi there ! I just wanna say this is really interesting as a poem . It reminded me of a story in a sense, how it had a beginning , ...

Hey there! This poem made me chuckle - the rhyme you've used in your poetry is quite amusing.. Like when you put "ies" on the end of each word in ...

Hi! I really liked this poem and thought it flowed really well, with your use of caesura to steady the pace. I really admire how distant you've made the people ...

Hi there, I remember reading your previous work - as your style is very distinct. So I thought I'd write you a review. Beginning with your style, I find it ...

Hi there ! I really enjoyed reading this and thought I'd write a review. I read the review below and sort of disagree. As it is a short story I ...

Wow this is very powerful. First of all, I'd like to say, the way you've structured it - with repetition of "The dark" at the beginning of every sentence is ...

Hi there! I thought this was a really interesting read.. and the meaning behind it I am still unslightly unsure but I still think I may have got it :P ...

Hi there! I thought this was really first I thought you'd made a spelling error with the title :P ... but no that kind of makes sense. I like the ...

Hi there! I thought this was a really cool chapter and I genuinely don't think I've read anything like it! It was soo cool and quirky with the things you ...