Lauren2010

Hi EKK15! Wow. I can feel the emotion coming through very clearly in this poem, which is the main reason I come to poetry. I love the hopelessness coming through ...

Hi Radrook! There's so much about this poem that is just fun . The rhyming is solid, and the first few lines have an awesome alliteration to them. Plus, the ...

Hi Vetas! Ah, dieting and exercise. Something almost everyone can relate to! Which is a great position to be in when you're writing anything. It also means, unfortunately, that a ...

Hello jamgalloway! Lauren here for a Review Day review! I know I haven't read the previous...42 chapters, but this was a super enjoyable read anyway! There were things here and ...

Hi Nymeria! (I love your username!!) Man, for a brief plot description of a short film this held a lot of tension and emotion. That's a fantastic place to start! ...

Hi Marms! Wow, this is just lovely. I'm very interested in poets who write within such unusual structures/formats like this. I find it hard, as a baby poet, to wrap ...

Hello again! I'm so excited to circle back around and see how each character is continuing to advance through their stories. And man, Corso has a bunch happen to him ...

Hello again! And at last, our final (I'm assuming?) main character is introduced. You've done a really great job of bringing in these 4 different people with distinct experiences. They're ...

Hey Feltrix! Back again~ Man, I am just enjoying where this story is going. Nyx's introduction is just as fun and compelling as Thorn's was, and I'm interested to see ...

Hi again, Feltrix! Whoooa this just got all magic-steampunk and I am very into it. This totally upended my expectations from the first chapter (which I was reading as a ...

Hi Feltrix! Lauren here for a review ^^ I noticed later chapters of this hanging out in the green room, but rather than tackle them blindly I decided I'd swing ...

Hi Pernicus! Lauren here for a review ^^ Woah, man. I am immediately back in my college apartment. I love so many of these details here. They're so specific and ...

Hi Augustus! Lauren here for a review ^^ Since this has a #1 beside it, I'm going to assume it's part of a larger piece and review it as if ...

Hi Sharon1407! Lauren here for a review ^^ First off, what a well constructed poem. o_o The flow of the movement is all very clear, and I feel like I've ...

Hi CateRose17! This was based on a song, right? Man, I miss the days of writing stories based on songs. I don't know when in my writing life I stopped ...