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Would this be a bad time to say, I've given up on this? Thanks for the review!

xD, that was absolutely amazing, Deanie!

XD' you're a brave soul Deanie. Thanks so much, I've actually consider rewriting this in the future. Starash is actually without the capital A, but my mind obviously is bi-polar ...

I very possible am.

xD, well that makes way more sense! I will read it first and review your second chapter. Sounds good?

I will review this. Just keep those PMs up. xD

Ok first of all, that wasn't my intention at all. There are no such thing as a good writer or a bad writer or a wannabe writer. If you're. Writer, ...

The paragraphs got merged.x.x

In that case, I apologize, buy you should know that whenever you post a work on YWS. You're bound to receive criticism, and we aren't doing this to be cruel ...

Ah, I see. For the empathy transfer, you need to explain that to the readers because we aren't exactly aware of that. I know that she was trapped, what I ...

I was going to review this, but seeing that you've already received three. I will move onto the next too, regarding to the ships. You actually do want to so ...

Thank you so much for pointing those things out, I will admit that the imagery in this is very blurry which is why I'm going to rewrite it again. Taking ...

I've tried to stop saying how helpful your reviews are, because they are very helpful. Yeah, I will admit I was rushing things and skipping over things. >< Things are ...

Bump, someone review this. -.-