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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Twin Blades Chapter 3 Nobody Is Perfect

    (Editing it ...)

    Mar 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Most wanted writers!

    This. Was. Really. Interesting. My first reaction to this was, "Spot on" You couldn't have put this in better words. I'm tired of reading the good-old,"You are my coffee and ...

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: To Condemn and To Judge: Not the same

    Speechless! Hi Wriskypump, Laughmaster here to praise your work. I don't know how people might review this work? This Is Brilliance! By all means this is epic! my Way, your ...

    Aug 25, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Lyrical Re: Lenny Law

    I have no idea what this is, but because this work needs at least 2 reviews to clear out of green room, I'm here to review your work This review ...

    Aug 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Taxi in Kampala

    Brilliant! Hi jessiethought, Laughmaster here to fanboy your work ;) I'm sorry if this review doesn't provide any value addition. This was dark work, embedded with colorful imageries and descriptions.

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: I stopped living

    An engaging piece! Hi there, Laughmaster here to review your work. I have to admit the title really succeeded in sucking my attention. This work is short (might be one ...

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Other » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: An uncertain feeling

    Needs some improvement! Hi there, Laughmaster here to review your poem. Warning: This critique isn't exactly praiseworthy. Really sorry if it hurts you. I don't want to be mean but ...

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Your Sweatshirt

    Beauty! Hello there, blocked-writer (That's a supercool name, I wish I had chosen this ;) So Laughmaster here to review your poem. This was a thoroughly offbeat topic to pen-down. ...

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Take Me To Peace

    Lovely! Hi there, Laughmaster here for reviewing your poem. I agree with the previous reviewer. You have an impeccable sense of word choice. The words you have chosen fit exactly ...

    Aug 23, 2014
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: A Wascally Wabbit

    Stunning! Hi there, Laughmaster here to review your 'really short story' :D This was a short and dramatic story. A big confusing and still engaging. My first impression after reading ...

    Aug 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: there is predicted precipitation this evening

    Wow! This. Was. Really. Good. Hi there, Laughmaster here to review your poem! there once was a boy and he liked the rain he would write his best stories to ...

    Aug 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: swahili

    Swahili work here? greetings nawaamkua, discipline naashiria, this limesumbua, the elderly and children as well, I can not remain silent, hide most chilling, must to open the mouth, I do ...

    Aug 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: The Forest.

    I walk across the green forest floor Listening to the sound of a stream in the distance. I sit on a large grey stone by the stream. I listen to ...

    Aug 23, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: An open letter to my country - India

    Bang on my friend! I really loved it :D Hi Farhan, Laughmaster here for some valuable advise. You are emotional. About your people, your loved ones. About their likes, dislikes, ...

    Aug 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: break, exposed

    Damn true! This was an adorable work. Hi there, LaughMaster here to review your work. I know it's not the best thing to start with, but I found your work ...

    Aug 22, 2014


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