LastPaladin

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for this one, I'm changing my usual style. I shall first note I actually really like, it's extremely abstract, but it's ...

Okay, we can begin, I'm LastPaladin and after second read of this, I can say I like this and warn you other than one minor thing, I thoroughly enjoyed it, ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today. Unlike previous reviewer, I don't like this, so understand this review will be harsh, but it's improve you I ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today, this poem unlike what the other person said, doesn't flow well, it's rhyme scheme goes hello, then goodbye halfway ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today, a poem about dying --- well at least it's not a suicide poem, so perhaps it'll stand up to ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today, this piece seems rushed. I shall review this by stanza so as to get all the good and bad ...

Okay, I shall try at least make a comment on this. AdamBH your poetry seems to go from gosh darn awful, to wow that just pure amazing and my little ...

Wow Warrior Princess, just wow. This is a impressive piece of work, and original may I dare so. I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer. Right off the bat ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, for this piece I understand trying to be nice but as things go this isn't a great piece, it just seems ...

It's rare for me to like a rhyming poem but for you I think you managed to tickled my fancy with this little ditty, sure it's not deep or thought ...

This is like a phone conversation and that isn't a good thing, it just goes on and on and never really gets to the interesting bit, instead just seems to ...

Oooooooooookay, at fifteen I wasn't writing about this... I was writing romantic love poems instead. This here seems like a parody of itself. It's so bad it's actually good. Which ...

I think I got gist of this, took reading it fully twice over to get, well hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer. This is impressive and yet ...

IceCreamMan this is a great piece, it echoes many of my own thoughts but you put them in such a way I stand at awe. I'm LastPaladin and I shall ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, first off I'm going to say it was a selfless move to write about bullying in such a true sense. That ...