LastPaladin

Hello, I'll be your reviewer, I'm LastPaladin. And well, the title to begin with does nothing. This should make it clear that this review is going to be harsh. This ...

NewHero this was interesting it was good in some respects but others especially second stanza it falls flat. Hello I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer. I see much potential ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer. Basically let me explain this now, this had no real feeling from it, it's a environmental message I get. But you do ...

After reading a terrible poem this is so refreshing, I have no complaint of this, the non-punctuations works well. And it really captures the quote. I certainly saw the scene ...

Sunset, expect this to be your last one with our vast return as your death is set. At three sixes where hill-beacons burn, run- In the darkness, undressed, blood-red, unfed, ...

Only thing I'd correct is the fact what Elinor said. It works and I like it's jovial tone. I kinda wish you ended it at 'Have a jubilee' as this ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin, I'm sorry to say I didn't like this, but why you ask. Well it tries to be witty and it's not. It's not creative it's being navelgazing. ...

Greeting Eflwriter I'm LastPaladin, and like Flower and Elinor said this is nothing really, you don't make us feel anything you break the most important rule in poetry, 'Show don't ...

Greetings I'll be your reviewer for today, unlike the reviewer before. I felt this was in my opinion 'too emo' you overuse certain themes and you never truly explore them, ...

Hello, I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer, let me be honest I love this, but sadly this isn't everyone cup of tea, it's 'stream of concious.' which tends to ...

Hello, Riot, I'm LastPaladin and though this tries to do something new in this genre that needs some inspirations, it come across as contrived and very weak. You have floppy ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin I'll be your reviewer. I'll be blunt straight off, I didn't like it, but to explain why is that it's not a poem, it's only a series ...

Hello I'll be your reviewer for today. The repeatition got tedious after a while and it's no way unique. This theme is popular. And well it's zen, I admit but ...

Greetings Christian, I'm LastPaladin and I see some great imagery, and some beautiful metaphors. But this poem falls apart, because of two reasons it comes across as preachy and it's ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin. I'll be honest right away I loved this. I'm a harsh reviewer but to be honest I can't find anything to complain about. The rhythm is beautiful ...