LastPaladin

Alice, this is an amazing piece and so vibrant how you describe our lives by colour, by a collage of shades. I think I can safely say this is by ...

Hmmm, I'm LastPaladin and well this doesn't hold much water, it's essentially a series of statements, the likes you get off a Hallmarks Greeting card, it's message is sweet, but ...

Hello, I'm LastPaladin this poem doesn't make me do anything but roll my eyes, it follows same tired formula which at this point is just beginning to annoy me. This ...

Hey Elinor, I'm sorry to say that because this come across as unfinished it seems contrived and cliche, you give some vague ideas that could be good but the cliche ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer, this here just blasts 'show don't tell' to the moon of all places. As you begin rather haphazardly with a cliche line ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer. I'm going to first some advice here that could be be considered a poem should have more than sweetness, it should have ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I'm here to review your piece. To begin with it was a valiant effort, much like the Captain's but my main reason for disliking this is ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I feel bad here as this is sweet, but really it's nowhere near enough to stand up. You never even give us substantial images, it's all ...

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God, what can I say, this is a really strong poem, I love this stanza best: I found the devil 'neath a stand of oaks. He offered me eternity, but ...

Hello, I'm LastPaladin and I can't agree at all with what people say. I've prayed and hoped wouldn't have to jump in and comment like this, but everyone praising this ...

(Be warned I'm harsh, but I do this to help the person) Hello, I'm LastPaladin and this read more like a dictionary definition of death with an added religious context. ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer. Now, I'll warn you now I'm known for being harsh, but it isn't meant to hurt you or anything, in fact I'd ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and this here has potential but what ruins it is the first line. You never let the readers guess what happens, you instead give it away straight ...

I'm honestly impressed Lumi. But you don't wanna hear praise, it's dark, and I love dark, the title reference film I'm guessing? If not no idea. I like how you ...