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Re: Word Catcher
This seems to be an interesting opinion on semantics, an often scorned facet of human intelligence, fousing mainly on double meanings. The authoer seems to be speaking of how they ...
Jul 26, 2014 -
Re: All That He Says That I Am.
This is an interesting poem and in it you seem to be struggling with wether to accept your own criticism or your (parents?) praise. An often visited subject of being ...
Jul 26, 2014 -
Re: something else
At first this poem seemed to be your opinion on the brain as seperated from the visceral self. Bit them it seemed to take a more spiritual turn. Like the ...
Jul 25, 2014 -
Re: What Alex Said
This is an intriguing poem. It seems to be about a person who has been changed drastically by an incident, a story. And behind the picture, the anecdote that, through ...
Jul 25, 2014 -
Re: Sunglasses
I feel this way about my face ): just kidding. But I think Im goind tho be way off with this interprestation. I think that you mean that you try ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: Time Traveling Pants
This poem seems to be about trying to save a relationship or hobby with gimmicks. I guess it may work for a bit but then it gets old and the ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: Time
This is an interesting poem. Simple but effective, you elaborate on the idea of seconds passing, and illustrste to the full extent, the time people have already wasted or took ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: Return and Delivery
This poem seems to be about contextualism, and how people try to tell you what (i) you (a) mean. But since I love to interpret Ill try anyways. So this ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: For What it's Worth
You are writing about environmental destruction? You suggest that if a more modest individual held as much power as, say, a plastics manufacturer, they would respect the earth, as it ...
Jul 15, 2014 -
Re: Nuts for YWS
Well this is a poem that echoes my own excitment. I started writing over summer brake, and was very enthused to find a society of budding young writers such as ...
Jul 15, 2014 -
Re: chewing
This is an interesting poem, although I dont exactly understand it. I get the "more than I am accounted for part" as the writer believes that another life-form is growing ...
Jul 15, 2014 -
Re: Noticed
Okay first off Im going to nitpick. Beer, although alcoholic, is not liquor, as it has not been distilled. Now this did seem to be a more casual piece of ...
Jul 15, 2014 -
Re: Melanie Coley
Does this poem have a double meaning? Because two messages are palpable to me here . One is that melanie coli is a metaphor for melancholie. I feel lucky about ...
Jul 15, 2014 -
Re: Dull Scissors
You are a very interesting amorist! I normally dismiss more emotional poetry such as much of the work that you do, perhaps foolishly, but now I see that when done ...
Jul 15, 2014 -
Re: Some More Melodramatic B.S. That Nobody Will Read
Hmm well yes a little cheesy but a little cheese every now and then doesnt hurt. It tastes quite good. Bet that came off as brash, but its actually a ...
Jul 15, 2014
