LadySpark

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This was cute! I enjoyed the realism and simplicity of it. It kind of reminds me of a where the sidewalk ends poem. You really put me in the shoes ...

hey there! really like what you have going here, especially with the audio accompaniment component. It really adds a great layer to your poem. I'm going to focus on what ...

Hey there! Spark here for a little review day review. Let's get into it! I like how you're directly addressing the reader as if they are in a conversation with ...

Hi Bear, Spark here to review. Let's get into it! Wow. Lot's going on here. I'm going to go through each poem individually, but review this from a more wholistic ...

Hi Forever! Let's get into it First off, I love this metaphor of spiders and power. I really enjoy this poem in its entirety but there are some beautiful lines ...

Hi Harray, You've got a lot going on here and I think you've got a great overall question and theme going for you. Curiousity is a great trait to have ...

Hi Cage, let's get down to it. I like the direction you're going with this poem, as comparative metaphors can be really compelling. I'm also a really big fan of ...

Mwahahhaha, just going to spam review you for review day, ig ;) this poem happens to have one of my favorite lines from your napo, the final stanza. i really ...

hey, hey, hey chi! commented on your thread that i wanted you to post some stuff so i could review and then i saw you had so i decided to ...

hey! saw this has no reviews and couldn't resist jumping in. there's something really effortless and seamless about your poetry quality that I really admire that I know is not ...

this is good and the vagueness comes across very well. i do think you have some superfluous phrasing, but that can be easily fixed in a little bit of workshopping. ...

hi there, dear! i love how many poems you post. keep it up xo i also have to respectfully disagree with Snoink about tone choice, I think your tone in ...

Hey Sofie! I like how your poem is bright, cheerful, and just overall really sweet. There's an element of innocence that makes it really endearing to the reader. I like ...

Hi! wow. just wow. this is so excellent I don't really have any critiques. You have such a carefully established rhythm there's nothing really I can speak to. I absolutely ...

hi friend! i am obsessed with this reflection on growing older and watching your body grow older. When you started out, I wasn't sure where you were going, but by ...