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the way you move your feet when you're trying to go nowhere is a very telling thing

  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: The Pursuit of Happiness

    Hi Rebel! Just dropping by for a quick review on your rap! Being able to rap is one of my secret skills that I'm quite proud of, and it was ...

    Aug 3
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: gentlemen who make a living as poets, fathers, physicists, lovers

    Hey there, orb! I am so excited to review this poem, I've had it bookmarked since you posted it! I'm going to be using the Team Egg template today, since ...

    Aug 1
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Theatre Re: all i'm sure of is that he's someone i've always known

    Hi FireEyes! Excited to dive in with you on this work. Thanks for sharing it! I'll be using the #TeamEgg template for today's review in honor of Review Day! The ...

    Aug 1
  • Poetry » General, General Re: everyone's born to be deranged

    Hi herb! Been a minute since I was able to review something of yours - so let's dive in! Ugh, I love your way of writing. Your imagery is fantastic ...

    Jul 24
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: development of an eating disorder

    Hi! I told you I'd be back! First and foremost, this is a topic that can be difficult to explore and feel genuine - and you do it very effectively ...

    Jul 19
  • Poetry » General, General Re: messy femininity

    Hey cherie!! I have so many of your poems bookmarked to read and review, so please prepare yourself for somewhat of an onslaught.... I apologize in advance - I can't ...

    Jul 19
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: remember when john green said if i show the world my belly it will devour me

    Hey there! I've had this bookmarked for a bit and wanted to pop in for a quick review. First of all, nice work! I love the structure and title of ...

    Jul 17
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Mementos of a Life We Used to Live

    Hi! Thought I'd pop by for a little review. The melancholy of this poem is palpable in a way that immediately made me grieve for the loss the narrator just ...

    Jul 14
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Girls

    Good morning! So I actually really love this. It feels like I'm sitting in your brain, hearing your thoughts ricochet off one another and it feels so authentic and raw ...

    Jul 8
  • Poetry » General, General Re: second hand

    Hi Luxeterna! Ah, this is a favorite topic of mine! Making friends outside of childhood is always tinged with a little bit of a different tone. The stakes feel higher, ...

    Jul 8
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: some velvet morning

    Hi friend! Thought I'd stretch my review legs and pop on to say this is gorgeous and I really love how you sank your teeth into this one. I have ...

    Jul 12, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: where the branch hit my neck

    hi love!! i'm not sure if i've ever reviewed your poetry before, so i'm excited to dive in! she lays supine in the woods-- the mulch is scattered like stars ...

    May 31, 2025
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Baby don't lie

    Hey there! Ah, some of the classic topics of romantic poetry - sex, intimacy, lust, and love. Every poet has to experiment and play around with their own methods of ...

    Sep 8, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: you & all the dates i should not forget

    Hey there! Your first line starts off and immediately pulls me into a very specific, vivid image. It was a little abrupt, but I’m not even mad about it because ...

    Sep 8, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Do you know who you are?

    Hey there! I really enjoyed the metaphors and imagery you used here - specifically the third and fourth lines in the second stanza - thoughts racing like greyhounds. One of ...

    Sep 8, 2024


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